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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They are STILL at it?! Wow!
Putting off during heat is bad eh xD
Kyashin are built for this in their physiology, but what about human Max? He's gotta take a break some time sooner than Kasan would like, but still.... Shouldn't that time be soon?
Then Kasan can carry his Max, RUN back to citadel, and continue his sex frenzy back in his room. If they make it back in time. Otherwise, they can do it anywhere else, just please, GET OUT OF THE FOREST DAMIT!

Even with andro out there on guard, it's still not safe enough!

Why can't Kasan do Max while he walks back. I mean, Kasan's strong enough to be carrying Max while impaling him what. Get up and OUT Kasan! You can continue your thrusting on the way. xD Wouldn't that be a scene. Good luck Rui!
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated. *happy dances allll around you. ^^
Sheesh i hope Kasan's mate can keep up with him... he's only human after all. ;P
person miles
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank youuu ! For this new update and the long and good chapter !! ^^
person Nitya
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay! <3 anonther chapter <3
I pity them but Rui is so cute! I can't wait to see who he'll choose
person Mona
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was soooo happy when I noticed that a new chapter of the story was out!
I've been following it since the very beginning and checking it regularly *lol* It is just lovely, especially because the two views of one situation are always so hilariously different. This chapter was cute too, poor young guard. :)
Keep up the good work!
person jdbbrz27
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The middle and ending was soooooo hot. Although I didn't think you needed to describe the fighting scene's aftermath and such it was actually quite boring so I skipped most of it but you more than made up for it in the latter half of the chapter. I loved the part where Androkees was teasing the guys and also how he was guarding the couple such a good guard dog and friend absolutely loved that part. And the part on how the poor guys were reacting to the couples lovemaking considering how much the two had coupled before they were found and knowing Kasan and little Max they probably have a ways to go. Poor little Max he'll be exhausted by the time Kasan's done with him probably won't be able to walk for awhile either although Kasan would probably love to carry him and snuggle with him on the way home. Thank you so much for the update hope you can stay healthy at least for awhile.
person cbs
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving it, the different perspective works really well here, so HOT! :)
person perkazy
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for another hot chapter! Can't wait to read more!
person orkchild
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad your back long time no read. But well worth it
person lucmaria
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good updated..is perfect. i just hope that u will not takes so long for the next updated.....but when i see your new updated is always make my day more brighter....cheers.....will waiting your next updated eagerly.....