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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person SammyD
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeow! Talk about awkward!!! Still, that was very hot!!!
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah for the next chapter! I admit that the first part of the chapter was rather boring, but the middle and second half was so steamy that it made up for it. I'm brimming with so many questions! Will Andokees(spelling?) go with Max back to the citadel, what will happen between the king and Leero, and what about the humans that they've found? I just want to know everything! Also, something big, how did Max and the rest of the humans end up in the future in the first place? I'm looking forward to the next chapter, you're such a sweetheart.
schedule August 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haha, poor Rui, Kasan and Max are such horndogs that they sent him into a premature heat! Very funny chapter. I look forward to more!
person kylee123
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Max is going to double die of embarrassment when he realizes that the guards have been watching Kasan fuck his brains out this whole time. I hope poor young Rui gets to hook up with Zerard like he had hoped. I think Androcles deserves a super sized award for helping the royal couple so much. He should get the Peace Prize for brokering peace between the shokan and the kyashin. I hope they will look at his injured foot and help him out. Lovely chapter Twisted Hilarity. You have made my day as always.
person Kip
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Phew! So utterly worth waiting for! And (thankfully) clearly not the end either... Ah well, guess I'll just settle down and wait for the next installment... 'Purr
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank god you updated, I feared you'd been taken hostage or something. I loved it. The chapter let me know that Maxs and Kasan were going to get home ok and it added some depth, but I'm left with still unanswered questions. Like, will they ever realize how the tosa respond to Max, will Leero mate with the king, is Shoru going to warm up to anyone after this, can they design a saddle to put on Adroclees so Max can ride him around like a horse, how many times have Max and Kasan had sex now, and will we hear any good news pertaining to the recovery of the other humans? I'm bursting at the seems for more. Please update soon!
PS: I wonder if I'm the only one who would love to see little Adroclees Shokan puppies running about the citadel.
Much love, till next time ~bye bye~
person Wynja
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this story and it was great to see an update! I wish they came more often (no pun intended)... ;)
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awesomr chapter as always. traumitzing that poor young guard.
person butterpie
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wowsers, good to see, as well as hear that Kasan found his consort once more, but poor Rui now has the hots oh so bad *snicker*. Oh and good to see that Androceles still has his sense of humor as well what with scaring the rescue squad before allowing them access to Kasan's reunion with his consort. Now what's next from your ever so fetile imagination-hmmm?
person melsa
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh happy day a post! I just wish that it was more kasan and max, not from others pov =/ Poor Rui.