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i like this, i think its cool, but how r u going 2 translate it so Kasan and max can speck 2 each other, but still really cool hope theres more :)

What an interesting and original story! I can't say I've ever read anything quite like it. It's so hard to find good, plotty (and smutty *grins*) original slash stories in my experience. This looks really promising, I hope you continue it. And good luck getting the computer repaired. I'll have to go check out your Inuyasha page when I have more time.

you are going to continue this, right?

Lovely story! Can't wait to find out what will happen next.

I love it!! I adore Kasan already and 'Gisho' makes me want to pounce him and steal him away xD Can't wait to see more!


Though I would advise you to put this in the Original Slash section .. You'll probably get more hits that way as the Original Romance section is mostly M/F. ^^

Oh no please don't stop there.its very good more please

Ah didn't realize there were two chapters - which is all the more better! I'm glad we finally get to see Max's point of view, lol. I love how he freaked out over the 'giant cat aliens' and the fact that he got fucked by one xD I really can't wait to read more now ^^

dun dun dunnn

CHAPTER 2
Hi, szaugglaughs,
What a great story! Two really good chapters. I like a way you did POVs of Kasan and then Max and the difference in their perception of things. This is so well done!

The backstory on both main characters is also excellent, so much explained and it was not longwinded or boring! Just wonderful.

How long does this consort deal last - till next season or longer? I can't wait to read the next chapter where they meet. Hopefully Max knows their language (still laughing about the way he got his first job!)

I am so glad that you posted this, I only read Original Slash and Harry Potter fanfiction, so, not likely to venture into Inuyasha.

Thank you:D

Wow, did you just jump to the Slash section before my very eyes? Good idea, hehe. Welcome!
Thanks, Sekre:)