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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Lina
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! LOVE THIS STORY!! AND THE FREAKY CAT DUDES... PRICELESS!!!!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
extremely enjoyable! looking forward to your next update!
person green
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this!
person AO
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my! I really love this XD Max is such a tard :P I love the weird stuff he was saying, but then again he was drugged. XD anyway, i can't wait for the next chapter! :O
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've never read any original slash and probably wouldn't have if it hadn't been recommended by an author with good writing skills. I like what you have so far. It worked out rather well that Max is a linguist and can therefore learn the language of Kasan... Hope you continue this work as well as your Inuyasha yaoi works soon. Good luck with the computer mess too. Great job!
person mystic87
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really nice start to a story. I like the long chapters and I like the situation the two are you. Very nice. I love kitties. I really liked the way that your kitty boy described his "alien". I can see someone from another world describing us like that. Waiting for the next chapter!
person Azl
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I love you, I love you, and I'll confess my undying love for you once again: "I LUFFAAA joooooooo!!" God, that was well-written. If I weren't so blinded with tears of joy and amusement, I would've been rereading that (I've done it sadly six times already ;[ ) over and over again. Kasan is such a complex character; I was totally understanding of his situation of not finding any male on his planet fuckable. I mean, they're all 'effin GIGANTIC FREAKS or so I get from Max's point of view. Ahem, at any rate, give more descriptions about the awfully tall cat-like men; I swear to God it'd make readers (like me O_O)be happy! And ooo a planet full of cat men.... sexahhhyyyyy. xDD

~Great job, -Bawls eyes out-
Azl
person Elliot
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
Gisho is so sweet.
Please please write more!!!
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I love the languge that you use! and I love the story line! pleas update this soon!
person TheHuntress
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, this is really promising to be good. I am looking forward to seeing how the situation evolves - from both their viewpoints. Ought to be entertaining - as well as hot, hopefully ;o)
If I might point out a slight discrepancy: at the beginning of the second chapter, it is mentioned that the eyes of a Kyashin in heat are neon green. Yet Max later remember a cat-man with brown eyes taking him. Nothing that a quick edit can't fix though.