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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person dac720
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! Not only did you get me to wander into the original section, you got me to love you for it. As with your other stories I was very impressed by the depth you gave each character without being too wordy. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter in this potential masterpiece.
person Arie Date
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude this is so cool!!! Please tell me that you will update when you get your computer fixed! Please!! I really like this. It is so unusual. I have a cat-boy fic for you. It's called Fuzzy Love on ficwad.com. You have to e-mail the author to get the real story but it is really cool. Fair warning it's a Kingdom Hearts AU so I do think you'd like it but I have no way to really compare. Hope you'll at least look into my suggestion. More origionals and Inuyasha PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
person kara Y.
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, deer. Great job. Update soon!
person Nacht Kind
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story tickles me a fascinating shade of pink let me tell you. The fact you are one of the most expedient updaters I have ever had the pleasure to behold is simply icing on a multi-tiered cake.

Max is such a sassy bastard, I love it; his ability to maintain such a reasonable approximation of calm is admirable. I forgot to applaud you on this, but clever thinking, making him a linguist; many people would simply gloss over such a glaring detail as communication barriers. Your solution relieved such a problem, and presented itself in an amusing and plausible context. I must wonder, has he simply been floating about space with the equivalent of Super-Nyquil seeping through him, or is there more to his MIA species?

Kasan…….sounds like a walking wetdream. Which is really all I ought to say on the matter, as that fairly covers it, but I find his jaunty demeanor quite pleasing. Perhaps it’s me, but I have no difficulty imagining him with a roguish smile and supremely confident stride.

Inordinately pleased to have found this,
Nacht
person Anon
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have a really interesting concept... like the other person said your description wasn't very interesting but I'm sooo glad I took a chance. your characters are great and I can't wait for you to write more.... ^)^ hopefully soon... ^_^
person Sekre
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Musk deer, scary o.o

I loved it of course - this story is hilarious with that sort of 'when are they going to jump eachother' sort of undertone. Poor Kasan .. I wonder how he's ever going to be able to introduce Max to the family.
person Sly
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Max is really really cute.
I like your story very much.
More! more! More!
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im glad you updated ! :D// i really love the way you've writen the different points of view..it makes the story even more interesting than it is.. update soon!
ciao~
person miles
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ! you're fast ! Thank you ! Great story...
person AO
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Max is hilarious! And, damn, loin cloths are sexaay. I really can't wait for more of this story! XD

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