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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person cinque
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so good. love it
person littleolmee
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my who knew it was so hard to get dressed. Poor Max, he is stuck with butt floss as clothes and he is the girl guy. Great chapter.
person littleolmee
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my who knew it was so hard to get dressed. Poor Max, he is stuck with butt floss as clothes and he is the girl guy. Great chapter.
person littleolmee
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a way to meet the family. Max was so worried about them doing something to his ass and it almost got spanked . . . hmm, did I see that once in a B-orgy movie (LOL)? Can't wait for more, this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories. Your doing so great with it; the characters really make you like them, the plot is great, wonderful chapters with plenty of details, comedy, and of course the man love. Please stay with this story, I'd be so sad if you didn't. Hope to see another chapter just as soon as you can, thanks so much for sharing this story with everyone.
person tellnoone_noonetells
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW.... Ok Im in heaven! I love this story. I love its plot. I love its human (OR alien) interactions. (Mainly the brothers! lol) I love the irony.(Maxs job is to know launges and he cant speak to them) And I cant wait to read the next chappy!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!)...Hehe cherry... Max dosent have his any more lol.... Im sorry that was ranadom.
person KamakuraYumi
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three chapters together! What a treat! Max is still so damned cute. I love the crazy thoughts that go through his head. Hmm... How many men actually think rape and kidnap could happen to them? Very few I'll bet... Kasan is just wicked. Please keep him that way... I loved the scenes with his brothers. I just cracked up! And the bit with the mirrors... Oh God! You know, I think Max is starting not to mind being the girl-guy, or is that just my imagination? For one insane moment back there I thought you'd gone sadistic and dressed him up like girl, until it was explained that he was just so teeny, Kasan's shirt just looked like a dress on him... Bah! More please.
person Zuka
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated i cant wait to read the next chapter, hope to see another update soon. ^_^
person supergirlanna
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i beg u, update soon. I am hooked! this is too good to describe. Great concept, wonderfully written... i love it!!!
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CH. 1-3

This story is one of the most entertaining fics I've read in a while. Max is... so cute! The "cat house" comment was hilarious and the way he calls them cat dudes! It's just so funny! Thanks I needed this tonight.
person Sekre
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! Poor Max ... I could understand the confusion - I'm sure if he wasn't confined he would have run the fuck off as soon as he saw the five brothers. At least Kasan came and gave them his mind ^^ And comforting ... sounds pleasant.