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OMG....u are updating the story...i am so happy, but a little dissapoint cause no max and kasan in this chapter and the ending is a cliffhanger....hope u stop torment your reader and updated soon...but u did a very good job with the fic hope everyone safe and happy again after this...

oh my gosh! what rock did you crawl out under from? It has been forever and a day since you added to this. It was a filler chapter at that.

Thanks for this new chapter !
I can't wait for all your characters to be safe and together again...
:)

Yes another update! Thank you so much I really love this story. I can't wait for the continue holding my breath :)

I was so happy to see a new chapter. It was beautifully painful to read. Poor Zonta. It's hard for someone who is not insensitive to human suffering to comprehend how someone could relish being the cause of it. fanatics are never in the right.

Thank you so much for the new chapter!
I feel for Zonta, though... all that angst (and he's one of my favourite characters too)! Hope he'll recover from the trauma and that poor Zerard will recover from his wounds. I'm definitely feeling the hatred against the Purists too, and hope they'll all be punished accordingly (but I don't mean by killing them).
Will the next chapter have as much angst? Don't know if I can take two in a row... but at least we can expect a happy ending in your story, right? ;)
And your stories are always well worth the wait, so don't worry if real life sometimes has a negative impact on your updating schedule. That's quite understandable. :)

Chapter 35, yes!
Well, this was a different chapter; no kasan, no Max...just Zonta.
I must confess i wasn't happy at the begining, but at the i like it becaude you kind of introduce us a new character...even if he is not, this is the first time we actually got to hear zonta's toughs, feelings...all of that.
Poor Zezard, that must hurt. Hope he gets ok.
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yay! updates! wow, i do wish there was like a list or something to tell me when the updates pop up. i check originals at least once a week but i still miss things.
well, max has settled into the whole alien consort thing well enough, but i don't blame him for being embarrassed as hell. do andy and cleo think of max as their pup? well, i'm sure cleo does.
those poor kids, seeing what battle really means for the first time is rough, especially when they're as sheltered as the young princes.
i hope someone gentle mates that wild kid. it's a pity his guardian is still tied to the traitor wanker cause you can be sure, despite his rough mouth, he'd be gentle with him.
i hope the guy on service can find a good mate too, he's cutting it pretty close.
i'd forgotten how much fun this story is.

I really love your story. This has got to be one of the best stories I've read. You are an incredible author with amazing talent. Please keep up with the story. Please keep it going and don't give up on it. And if you ever get the chance to have a story published I wish you the best even though you probably don't need it. Also, can you have Max sing to Kasan? Even if Kasan can't understand the song I think he'd really enjoy having Max sing to him. Maybe "You Are My Sunshine"? Probably not the best choice but my mom used to sing it to me when I was little as a lullaby. So I have a special attachment to it.

I started reading this a while ago, then got to the end of it. I was disappointed :( because it ended! I'm normally not a huge fan of original fics or characters, not to mention furies, but these two are adorable. Please update again soon!