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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person miles
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
" He truly was like the little mountain flower " ! It's very cute !! Kasan is in LOVE !!
Your lemon part is very hot ! Need a shower now ! ^_^
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 6
Oh, dear, THAT is why he would die if not mated? It all makes sense now. I do like a way this story is constructed, there is suspense, but not overly excessful.

Their second time was pretty hot. Now there is an explanation why Max is so turned on by Kasan. Too bad that poor human stil is not aware of his position:)
person Nacht Kind
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::outrageously amused:: Kasan's brothers sound disconcertingly similar to my own family....

I can't even begin to fathom the terror that stole through Max when accosted by the various family members; to feel so utterly helpless....Kasan's subsequent raging made me smile and wonder how he might clear this incident up. I apologize for the harried review, you caught me going out the door.

Thrilled to be an audience,
Nacht
person msobvious
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, more please! =D
person dac720
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't belive that Kasan would freak out so bad after hearing it was the "First Night" joke, but guess thats protecting ones mate for ya. Hopefully both him and Max will be feeling much better in the morning ;)
person aikoumbrella
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god please update soon! I'm already so hooked on this story, it's like WHOA!
person silvey
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Max thinks like I do so of course I love him! lol! I can't wait for more!
person romanticfae
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story really enjoyable hope u up date soon
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
am loving this.
I need more :op
person dut
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whohoo! sexay! Hope you can update soon man.. I am really lookin forward to their 'comforting session'!