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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
funny story! a good start. I really like their problem of communication, it's a nice change and probably what makes this story stand out to me as well. I hope you'll keep on writing it, and eventually even finish it...
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was something. *Grins* Something I like! LOL. Very nice, very descriptive and I enjoy being able to know what they're both thinking. Poor little Max is so confused and frightened and just needed a little sexual release! Can't wait for more!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So what are you planning for the language barrier. it kinda sucks that they can't talk to each other.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!=3 they finally got it on! thanks for the lemon:)
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Felines!!!!I love it and poor confused little Max among all those cat men. Please update soon.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay thanks for the update!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Max isn't given much time to think about his 'relationship' with Kassan *bg* The thought behind those nanogenes is still not really clear to me, maybe rereading that part will give me a better idea though. Keep on writing!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, they're so cute! I love the seducing Kasan!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This isn't so much a "review" as it is a thank you note. I'm really enjoying your story, and want to encourage you. Thank you for sharing your creativity with us.
Em
Em
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story you have going here!!! I absolutely love it!! I can't wait for the next chapter. although, it might be even better if you can lay off just a little on explaining so much and tell what's going on more. But besides that little detail your story is damn awesome!