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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person AO
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't remember if I reviewed this chapter or not, but I thought it was awesome! I really like this story, XD when I'm bored I daydream about what it would be like if this really happened XD *dork* :P
person Bibi11
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROTHFLMAO...oh this just so good! Sorry I took so long to place a review for you. Thank you for taking pity on us poor souls who were waiting for updates on 'Uke' and 'The Other Side of The Kazaan'. This story is just great!! I really enjoyed the 'dialog' between Max/Gisho and Kasan. Poor Max hasn't got a clue yet. When will he find out about his marking and new status? One of the things that I like about your stories are the bits of RL research that you put into them. Kasan has retractable claws like a feline; does he have a barbed cock too? That would be another surpise for Max/Gisho...lol! The handy, dandy Wikepedia had that little gem in it (and any book on cat physiology). That could be interesting if he has controll of how much the barbs protrude in use or at all.

With the amount of implied, constant sex that Kasan's race has, they must have balls the size of grapefruits. (Yeah, you can thank the 'Discovery Channel' and the 'National Geographic' for that twist in my head.) In the primate animal kingdom (gorrillas ((smaller pkgs)) vs a newly discovered tree chimpanzee ((extra large pkgs)) ), the more you have to screw, the bigger your balls, thus Kasan must have a big set for all the lubricant he can produce pretty much on demand. Or is it just a 'heat' thing? Again, thank you for another delightful story.
person memorietrail
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please write more.
person lazycat
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that is one hot story. I can not wait to see what is going to happen next. Hopefully more action between the two, it is so good to read. Yeah, not the most coherent of reviews, but I truly enjoy this story, and look forward to the rest of it. thank you for thinking of it and taking the time to post.
person jenner84
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this effin' rocks.
person riddlestar
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, im loving this story more and more with each chapter you put up! ive started visiting this site more often just to check whether you've updated...keep it up!
person dut
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow Max/Gishio could still have a hardon while in sleep.. amazing.. Poor guy does'nt know what goin on.. The boy is so cute an flusttered, his imagination is running wild and making up all asumptions of his situation.. ha ha
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Miaou - I want a 'kitty' too. Interesting thus far! I'm hoping for more.
person Stacy
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How in the world are you going to break the language barrier?? I will tell you this....I can't wait to find out!! Please try to hurry, waiting with laptop in hand sucks!! Oh.....I forgot to say I love this fic!!!!