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Yeay! An update, a wonderfully long update! Thank you. This is still wonderfully interesting and absolutely well written. Please update again soon!!!!!

Szaugglaughs,
Absolutely fantastic start to your story, though you need to update more. Your story reminds me of my favorite series by Lisanne Norman, the Sholan Alliance--ever read it? It's not yaoi, but follows much the same concept, perhaps you could use it for some story ideas. Do continue, as I said this is a wonderful beginning to your story.
Asyen

This is an amaising story. Max it too adoreble. Keep up the exelent work!

Hahahahaha this chapter was absolutely fab!!! Poor Leero! trying to catch a scared Max. ^^ Thank you for making this a loong chapter!!

I just gotta say that Max is soooooo cute! So he's finally going to be introduced to the family. That will be very interesting and I look forward to reading it!

I finished this story and have reread it four times today... fantastic concept and the humor is perfect. For some reason I would love to see you work in a food fight with Aosh getting a tomato like item tossed at him by Max during breakfast. Poor Max still no meal but plenty of exercise ha, ha

LOL. That was amazingly... sexy... and somehow... cute! But man, could you please explain what it is with the different species... and the tails (or lack there of on some of them?!) Unless of course that's SUPPOSED to be revealed later on. I'm just a TAD lost.

Thanks
Keep it up!

woooow chapter 4 had the perfect amount of sexual tention i love it i wish i could do that in my fics

Hey, I love this story. Keep up the good work.

hee, hee . . . finally got on here to review, can you believe I've reread this chapter 3 times now; kept running out of time to review, but that was fine cause it was a great chapter. This is my fav slash story at this time. Ch 6 was too cute. So "I don't want to be a whore" at some point translates to 'my delicate ass' . . . LOL! Weeelll. . . that's close, it has to do with his 'delicate ass' anyway. Max is really inbetween a rock and a hard place. What to do? What is he to Kasan or any of the 'kitties'? How did he get there? Where is there? And where the hell is the others? So many questions. The info about the heat and need for bond was very original and a neat addition, loved it. But what about Max, he doesn't have the nanities being not from there, right? Will it have any effect on him or are they only taking genetic material from him not staying in his body? What about the material they are taking will it effect him any? Now that Max has met the brothers Kasan will have to introduce him to the rest of the family very soon, won't he? Oh man, he better bring Max a paper sack so he can breathe into. Hey wait poor Max never got anything to eat! All he got was taken advantage of (again) in his sleep. Sigh, Max's 'delicate ass' just isn't safe is it?! LOL, thanks for such a great chapter it was a lot of fun to read plus the yummy slash pairing part. Can't wait to see what you post next, keep up the good work and thanks again.