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Okay got a question . . . when Leero and Niku are talking Leero refers to Max as 'he' but Niku goes on to refer to Max as a 'she' and Niku speeks about his 'grandson' but goes on to call his 'grandson' a 'she'? Was Niku just not listening to Leero and assumed Max was a girl cause of his size? It just got a little confusing there. LOL, Leero is learning quickly not to laugh at others expense isn't he? I know Leero was just trying to make sure Max didn't get his cloak in the pee water but talk about scaring the piss out of someone. Max maybe small but he's really tricky isn't he? That was some meeting . . . I'm sure none of them will forget Max . . . ever. It seemed that Kasan's family likes him more than he thought, he worrys about being a 'throw back' but everyone seemed relieved he had his mating time and was alright. Kasan's family seems like any other close family. The scene where his father is looking for answers and all the brothers take off to 'help' Kasan was great, the whole chase scene was fantastic! Laughed myself silly, espcially the "He's on your left, no your other left." and "Iee, it went between my legs." LOL!!! I guess Aosh got his for how he treated Max huh? Thank goodness for Zonta, finally a voice of reason. . . maybe he can help Max figure out what is going on. Well I guess everything worked out though, Kasan and Max were recognized by the family. Hmm, what is Kasan's uncle going to have to say about this, he'll find out being its broadcasted right? Can't wait to see what Max thought about all this. Thanks for the updates, I really love your story. Take care.

Wow! What a great chapter. You had me laughing so much, but feeling so bad that I was laughing. I couldn't help but feel terrible for Max. Can't wait for his point of view. Thanks for updating so often.

Ahh poor Max! He just seems to attract trouble wherever he goes XD

i couldn't have come up with a better chapter! ur writing is sooo wonderful! i's unpredictable and takes a different route all together which is making it a great read and then some! please update soon!

Your funniest chapter yet. My favorite parts were when Max peed on Leero and when Leero was told, "...get over here and look harmless!"

Poor Max he probabaly thinks he's getting handed off to Leero...I mean the description of the gathering sounded a whole lot like a marriage ceremony.

I can still see Max climbing, his naked tush naked for all to see.

Please don't keep us waiting too long for your next chapter.

I just seen your story had went back to the top so I took a look at what was going on. Much better, its not confusing anymore. I know when your trying to get a chapter out even with a talented beta's help at times things get through. I just wanted to say I think you have done a good job with your writing of this story its very entertaining, the characters are well done and how you present them makes the reader want to learn more and like them. You have a great story going on here, please don't loose heart and I hope you stay with it. I think you have a lot of readers just waiting for the next installment . . . ah the pressure of being loved huh? Take care and great job.

omg this is all i can think of!!!! please update soon!!!

I want to know what happens when max meets the inlaws! please update reallllllllllly soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg!!! Kasan is going to flip when he sees what state his little Gisho is in!!! I love this story so much! please update soon!

i'm addicted! you have a good, interesting plot. Thank you for updating so often!