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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Aleks
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!I love it!I love it!
That was so great the chase...really funny (poor Leero)....I need more! Please update as fast as you can :)
person shadow
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely fucking fabulous!!!!!!!!!! i almost jumped with glee when i saw that u had updated!!!!

i loved how kasan reacted when he found out about humans and height!!!

omg this chapter was sooooo brilliant that i re-read it three times

please please please update again soon!!!!!

U ROCK
person Anon
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lmao with this chapter. Thanks for making a Monday worthwhile!

person Anita
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*lol*

Poor Leero again! It's just not his day ;)

And poor Max aswell...I wonder what HE thinks is going on. He is lucky to have Kasan, since Kasan is willing to risk his own dignity and life to help Max.

Thanks for the fast update, I just love this story!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. Just, amazing. I love it and every part of it – the family, the nekojin; the hilarious audacity of it.
I usually get bored with fics after they introduce sex, especially if it’s early on, but not only am I craving so much more of this story, but I even enjoyed the sex scenes and the prospect of more.
I love the characters, and the scenario, and I can’t wait for everything to come together – so many unanswered questions!
So please keep writing!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ye gods that was funny!!!!! Bravo!! *standing ovation*

Please, please update soon. This is just getting more and more interesting!
person dut
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Funny!! It was hilarious.. I couldnt stop laughing when Leero had to demonstrate Max where to pee!!
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha thank you! this made my day!! ^^ Max is too funny! Poor Leero!! I realy pity him! *loughs* thank you!
person littleolmee
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurrah updates! I hadn't got to look at ch 7 yet so imagine my surpise and happiness to find ch 7 and 8. Ch 7,finally the food comes and Max is too tired to care. Liked the addition of the talk between the guards. Something the young guard said stuck with me though . . . being a consort wasn't for forever . . . does this mean that when Kasan has everything he needs from Max he will no longer be a consort? What happens when the consort bond is finished then? Do the two not stay together or is it up to the individuals? Now the older guard said he was a mate, so what is the difference? Is mate more of a forever thing than consort and can a consort become a mate? Wow! Max and Kasan have had sex 3 times in the last 8hrs? I'd say kitty Viagra. . . man, Smiling Bob off Ensight has nothing on Kasan. I really hope Kasan gives Max a break I mean really Max had never been the girl guy before and now he's got it 3 times in 8hrs?! He is going to need those pillows for more than just cover if this keeps going? I'm surprised he can walk normal. Obviously these nanities do have an effect on Max too, with how many times they are doing it and he feels so turned on by Kasan . . . or is this part of the bond? Oh and that little kiss Kasan gave Max and Max's reply that a kiss didn't make it all better was just too cute! Poor Max is just so confused, and it's damn funny in my oppinion anyway! The mirrors and washing up scene was great. It seems Max forgot all about those mirrors . . . and Kasan thinks he's putting on a show for him (LOL). Kasan seems to have lots of questions about Max but he seems more interested in sexing him up intested of trying to find answers . . . hmm, that could cause problems couldn't it? If humans were once consorts of those kittys people does that mean the first human colony had something to do with these guys? Will this go towards explaining what happened to the first colony? Any where are the rest of the humans? I got to say I really like Leero, he's a wonderful character. He seems to be enjoying Kasan's troubles just a little too much but it looks like Max is going to give him a taste of it too. Well I'm off to read ch 8, can't wait to see how this family meeting is going to go.
person Ao
schedule May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. LOL. This was a funny chapter, though I'm sure Max didn't enjoy it so much. XD Poor Leero, he is innocent! XD

Can't wait for the next update! ;P