rate_review Reviews

I am very much loving this story. It's one of the few original stories I've found on here that's actually making me want to write a fanfic about it (and I mean a serious fanfic not a spoofy throw a character in to have fun type of fanfic) I hope you take that as a compliment because it's truly meant as one. I'm very glad that you included such realistic details like having to actually learn the language and the complete obliviousness to the fact that human culture wouldn't necessarily be the same as the Kyashin. Although I do have some burning questions such as why all the animals think Max is shokan pup and what actually did happen to all the humans but I suppose I'll have to wait for that such answers. Oh well, thank you so much for such a wonderful story (I've devoted more time to reading it than I probably should have over the last few days... I've stayed up way too late...)

Ooohhh it's so good to see an update! I really find it interesting that there are places connected to the main home. It's like a giant maze or hive! The mysterious dead man was creepy. For a moment I thought they had somehow traveled back to where Max had come from. I'm glad they are safe though!

the WHOLE chapter was about Zonta. and I'm struggling to recall who exactly Zonta is. -headwall-
I know he's Kasan's sibling... but which one exactly? hehehehehhehehe... It's been awhile and well, memory fades.
I'm guessing he's one of the younger ones, one that doesnt have a consort yet?

hm. well.
ah... well... I was hoping Zonta's team would somehow find a passageway that leads to the haven that Kasan and Max are at now.
but oh well.
Maybe you have another heat-triggered smexing scene for Kasan and Max. wonder how you'll pull that off with Max freezing to near death and Kasan all guilty. and the audience! xD
We'll see. Here's to hoping you get to update soon! -cheers!-
and I'll throw a party if you get around updating Uke :P a big big BIG party. I'll invite you even, just no idea if you'd be able to come over this side of the hemisphere XD"

Good speed in writing TH :D

the WHOLE chapter was about Zonta. and I'm struggling to recall who exactly Zonta is. -headwall-
I know he's Kasan's sibling... but which one exactly? hehehehehhehehe... It's been awhile and well, memory fades.
I'm guessing he's one of the younger ones, one that doesnt have a consort yet?

hm. well.
ah... well... I was hoping Zonta's team would somehow find a passageway that leads to the haven that Kasan and Max are at now.
but oh well.
Maybe you have another heat-triggered smexing scene for Kasan and Max. wonder how you'll pull that off with Max freezing to near death and Kasan all guilty. and the audience! xD
We'll see. Here's to hoping you get to update soon! -cheers!-
and I'll throw a party if you get around updating Uke :P a big big BIG party. I'll invite you even, just no idea if you'd be able to come over this side of the hemisphere XD"

Good speed in writing TH :D

Chapter 35. Yes!!!! An update!!! You've made my day! I keep checking for any updates and woot! Thanks so much for updating and keeping the story going! As an avid reader and fan, I greatly appreciate it! Keep up the awesome writing!

It's touching to see how loyal the Kyashin (well, most all of Kyashin) are to one another. I love this story and I'm very happy to get an update. Thank you for all your hard work. Enjoy your "child-free" month.

Poor Zonta and poor Gerard both struggling to deal in their first actual combat experience. Gerard was very brave, if foolish in what he did for Zonta. Thank you for continuing this wonderful story of yours. I'm so glad you're back. May you and your family be well.

excellent as always. *Hugs*

A NEW CHAPTER!
You just made my day! I was feeling really bad this morning (Everything going downhill, dreadful weather and I had lost my one and only mobile-phone) - and then I checked for updates of AFF-stories I like - AND MY FAVOURITE STORY IS CONTINUED! I nearly cried with happiness (no kidding!). You see how much I appreciate your writing when just one new chapter can make so much difference to me...
Thank you for sharing your story and please continue soon!

If only they knew where Kasan and Max were and that they're relatively safe. Poor Zonta and Zerard. They should have gone after Warran... Although I guess Zerard would perish if that happened.