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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapt. 8
LOL!! Just too funny! The pissing lesson and then the 'Greeting' scenes are just priceless. I couldn't stop laughing...you have a wonderful sense of humor. Max is the perfect match for Kasan; he's more of a 'cat person' than he knows. All that running between legs and hiding and dodging and then getting stuck in a high place and having your keeper come after you, would make any RL feline proud! Max didn't miss anything! And it was all broadcast planet wide to boot too! Will he get to see a re-run of his 'Greeting'? Just imagine; instant replay during the 'Firstmeal'...analyzing all the moves and panning in for crowd close ups and of Max's bare ass in the air! LOL!! Thanks for the laughs!
LOL!! Just too funny! The pissing lesson and then the 'Greeting' scenes are just priceless. I couldn't stop laughing...you have a wonderful sense of humor. Max is the perfect match for Kasan; he's more of a 'cat person' than he knows. All that running between legs and hiding and dodging and then getting stuck in a high place and having your keeper come after you, would make any RL feline proud! Max didn't miss anything! And it was all broadcast planet wide to boot too! Will he get to see a re-run of his 'Greeting'? Just imagine; instant replay during the 'Firstmeal'...analyzing all the moves and panning in for crowd close ups and of Max's bare ass in the air! LOL!! Thanks for the laughs!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so fucking amazing... i mean...wow
i love ur writing!!!!!!!!
and the plot is fucking awsome
i love ur writing!!!!!!!!
and the plot is fucking awsome
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha! so funny!
More please!
More please!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's SOOOOO funny !! I love this chapter ! Poor Leero...
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 8
That was so funny and cool!
Kasan is so enamored with his little consort. Oh dear, Max pissed on Kasan's First in Command and Kasan got angry with Leero! And punched him! Little Gisho can do no wrong, a-hahaha! The whole scene where Max used the kitty urinal and pissed on Leero was so funny, but the scene where Leero had to EXPLAIN that on public did get to me big time! I'd nearly fallen out of the chair laughing:D Max is a part of the family now, so they are one point up on Leero. He might never have a proper come back. Good job, Gisho! He is going to be liked by his new family just for that one stunt!
Aww, Max started a new tradition: all Kyashin Hinta cosorts are walking the Silver Path and all Human ones are climbing the Banner! As long as everybody sees the Mark, it should work nicely.
I really liked how Kasan saved Max's life. He really is a cat! I can just see him leaping through the air! So hot! They are even now, because unwittingly Max saved Kasan's life as well.
Wonder how Max came to be approved for Kasan on the first place. There was supposed to be genetical test. I bet that Shovak ordered the test to pass. Whoever was involved in testing must of really enjoyed it. They DID approve the consort, following the order, knowing that Shovak's plans are going out of the window. He must really be hated by people - and scientists, hehe.
Throwbacks are decendants of humans mixed with Kyashin, right? Is Kasan part-human?
That was so funny and cool!
Kasan is so enamored with his little consort. Oh dear, Max pissed on Kasan's First in Command and Kasan got angry with Leero! And punched him! Little Gisho can do no wrong, a-hahaha! The whole scene where Max used the kitty urinal and pissed on Leero was so funny, but the scene where Leero had to EXPLAIN that on public did get to me big time! I'd nearly fallen out of the chair laughing:D Max is a part of the family now, so they are one point up on Leero. He might never have a proper come back. Good job, Gisho! He is going to be liked by his new family just for that one stunt!
Aww, Max started a new tradition: all Kyashin Hinta cosorts are walking the Silver Path and all Human ones are climbing the Banner! As long as everybody sees the Mark, it should work nicely.
I really liked how Kasan saved Max's life. He really is a cat! I can just see him leaping through the air! So hot! They are even now, because unwittingly Max saved Kasan's life as well.
Wonder how Max came to be approved for Kasan on the first place. There was supposed to be genetical test. I bet that Shovak ordered the test to pass. Whoever was involved in testing must of really enjoyed it. They DID approve the consort, following the order, knowing that Shovak's plans are going out of the window. He must really be hated by people - and scientists, hehe.
Throwbacks are decendants of humans mixed with Kyashin, right? Is Kasan part-human?
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Poor Max. Surrounded by giant cats all coming after him. Still, his awe of Kasan was sweet. Next chapter please!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Max... I cannot wait to find out what was going through his mind during that little fiasco. Hopefully he will be able to have a more casual introduction to his in-laws later on.
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it more and more with every chapter and I'm very glad you are not rushing to fix the problems with the language barrier in just a few sentences. Go on, you are good!
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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor baby! He keeps thinking he's a whore and he gets put into a room with a lot of kitties trying to catch him to look at his ass. xD Hopefully Kasan can calm him down .. wink SEX wink.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was the best chapter ever! i laughed my butt off=D, if that is possible. and if you update quickly i promise no physical harm will come to you, from me at least! =D