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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person dutsada
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute... seriously i love how everything is going...just hilarious...but i do hope Max will get the point that he's not in a slave house soon or he'll drive himself nuts!
person dutsada
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute... seriously i love how everything is going...just hilarious...but i do hope Max will get the point that he's not in a slave house soon or he'll drive himself nuts!LOL
person Sekre
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe. poor max! I'm glad you took time to update, though i know you must be scarce for time.
person butterpie
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thanks for this chapter. RL can be a hassle sometimes, and what a pleasure to come back online and see another chapter waiting to be read. Gotta love how quickly Max is starting to work things out. His language skills are already hard at work starting to sort out these people and their culture. Poor thing immersed in a world where little is familar and the language is so unlike any he has ever heard before. Perhaps we can see more of Max trying to understand the name of things by interacting them with Kasan who then can give his peoples version of what they are called. Maybe with some more bonding time as well. LOL. please continue.
person shadow
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i waited so long for that *pouts*... *sigh* ur lucky i love this story soooo much

poor max...who doesnt have a clue about whats going on

lol it was like role reversal... instead of a cute stuck up someplace high it was a human, and they all keep petting him lol

can't wait for you next update!!!!!

shadow
person mystic87
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I wish there had been more! I love Max. Really! I do! He's so cute and so worried. Poor guy doesn't have any inkling of what's going on! I can't wait for an update. This is a great story!
person butterpie
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to continue this? The suspense is just killing me. Really, I could use some comic relief right about now. Please continue.
person shadow
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when are you gonna update again :(
person Kelly
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story - I can't resist checking every day to see if it's magically been updated. *grin*

Poor Max, he just has no idea what's going on - The problems caused by the lack of a common language are both entertaining and sometimes sad; I really like how you have set this up. For both their sakes, it's a good thing it sounds like Max is quick at picking up languages!
person christina
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I was wondering if your still writing this story? I LOVE it by the way!