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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person womo
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh. great chapter. i enjoyed it.
person fruits
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg u updated finally! ^.^
person keomah
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Max! What a way to find out he's 'married' to Kasan...lol I really enjoyed the internal struggle Max is having between what his head is telling him and what his body is practically screaming for. Just plain funny!
person Sekre
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
xDDDD At least he kind of gets it? I love it!
person butterpie
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Max finally got the message about his status as Kasan's mate. Poor thing, and I just bet he wishes he were still ignorant of what it all entails. I sincerely hope to see more soon. I can't wait to read what you have next you saucy little minx, so please continue.
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're awesome. thank you so much for the chapter i needed it.
person kikib77
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! you updated! Finally, they were able to understand each other! So funny!
person hawthorne
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh man pooooor Max! IM too young to marry! hehehehehe...
at least they can start talking together more!
please keep writing here since I cant veiw your story on Y! anymore!
person Allie
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kasan! He finally manages to sort-of explain the situation to Max, and gets punched in the eye for his trouble! LOL I loved how excited Max was over the list of words, and how pleased Kasan and Zonta were to communicate with him. :)
person Aleks
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I can only say one thing: I need more!
Your story is sexy and funny at the same time....the perfect mix!