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for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Althydia
schedule November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another chapter so soon! Thank you so much!
I loved it and am so happy the group is back at the Citadel. The shokan were really helpful, I hope they won't have problems with the Elders... Also, it's obvious that the Kyashin have underestimated the shokan's intelligence, but is Androcles particularly smart? I was glad to know more about how he arrived into Max's life too. And wouldn't it be funny if Cleopatra stayed friendly with Rui? Maybe he would even overcome his fear of her after a while... Anyway, the relationship between Androcles and Kasan is still as amusing as ever (almost like a comedy duo, really), but it's really heart-warming how they both care so much about Max. :') Will Kasan's rooms become the shokan's now? Where they can raise puppies who will be used to Kyashin and can even guard the Citadel someday maybe...
But for now I hope they can all be healed (without any nasty surprises in the Citadel) and Kasan's family can be reunited - and Rui can find a mate quickly! And maybe we'll get hot sex between Kasan and Max in the next chapter? After all, Max still has to reassure Kasan - and I'm missing Max's funny inputs too. :) By the way, if the dress code is different between Kyashin, shouldn't Max be dressed like the people in the city? Although Kasan would probably miss the view...
Anyway, thanks again for your hard work - it's tremendously appreciated!
person kylee
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! Thanks for the new chapters! I am so excited to read them. Happy Thanksgiving.
person satterb
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love, love, love the shokan. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for all the updates! It's like Christmas early!
person luc
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i never thought will have the updated so fast...this fic is so good that what i can say is...i want moreee.....
person Ben
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amasing Story and other amasing chapter, so glad for updates, definately one of my favourite authors
person Chibikodo
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha The Shokan are something else. Do they have their own primitive language that everyone else can't understand, or are they merely highly intelligent animals?

This was an exciting chapter- especially when they were traveling through the Haven. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a glorious update! I was on edge reading it, sure something was going to go wrong, even after they got to safety. And it was great getting to find out how our favorite beast got in and found Max in the first place :) I hope the babysitting stuff keeps up <3
person miles
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Kasan is really the best consort ! So caring with Max... :)
And Androcles the best friend ever ! And funniest too...
Thanks for the fast update and for not forget your fans... ^^
person Saraste
schedule November 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
We finally get to know from Max and Kasan and all I want it MOAR! Wonderful chapter which answered some questions, Kasan's fretting over him ostensibly having been too rough with Max is hilarious! Have a feeling that their father and Leero aren't as much missing as they're doing it in some hidden away place... I giggle so hard during the reading of this.
person Jade
schedule November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story.