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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I just wanted to let you know that I just read the ten posted chapters in one sitting and I absolutely adore/love/worship this story. I think it's got a really clever plot and I like the dual POV approach, even though I assume it will merge to a regular omniscient POV eventually. I'm really excited to see how the characters progress as they learn to understand each other better, linguistically and emotionally. And I also must comment that you are extremely talented at writing smut; you manage to fit lots in without making seem forced or too much like a PWP and without losing the emotional quality. I bet I am not the only one who is very appreciative ;) I really hope you update soon, I'm really enjoying [i]The Last Pure Human[/i] and I can't contain my anticipation for the next chapter! Godspeed to your imagination and your pen, have fun writing :D
I just wanted to let you know that I just read the ten posted chapters in one sitting and I absolutely adore/love/worship this story. I think it's got a really clever plot and I like the dual POV approach, even though I assume it will merge to a regular omniscient POV eventually. I'm really excited to see how the characters progress as they learn to understand each other better, linguistically and emotionally. And I also must comment that you are extremely talented at writing smut; you manage to fit lots in without making seem forced or too much like a PWP and without losing the emotional quality. I bet I am not the only one who is very appreciative ;) I really hope you update soon, I'm really enjoying [i]The Last Pure Human[/i] and I can't contain my anticipation for the next chapter! Godspeed to your imagination and your pen, have fun writing :D
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July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is such an amazing story!! I really love it, and look forward to the rest of it!
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June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it - more and more with each chapter. I want a Zonta for myself! Go on and thank you for sharing!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 "I'm What?!!!"
Great chapter, lots of fun!
Love your sense of humor and Max's
responses to everything. These two
will make a fine couple!!
Thanks,
R
Great chapter, lots of fun!
Love your sense of humor and Max's
responses to everything. These two
will make a fine couple!!
Thanks,
R
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was great!!! I like your pace, your prose, and your dialogues immensely. It's great that you're putting so much details into this. Max is sooooo adorable, but Kasan, despite his size, is awfully cute too. I do hope you'll continue. Now that Max finally knows, I can imagine what kind of havoc he's going to cause Kasan. And I can't believe he punched Kasan in front of everyone! Kasan is never going to live that down, is he?
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i just love this story i really do its very very interesting and i always wonder what max will do next... oh and the eye punching thing was funny
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh and one more thing please please please update soon ^.^
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. love this <3
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8 - “It could be your face,” Jolan said. “I know it sure as hell scares me when I see all that ugliness in one place.”
Hahaha. I love this story. Oh man. Did I read right that Zonta is Aosh's twin? If so, I DEMAND TWINCEST! TWINCEST! RAWR. TWINCEST.
Well, you don't have to but it would be hot.
Hahaha. I love this story. Oh man. Did I read right that Zonta is Aosh's twin? If so, I DEMAND TWINCEST! TWINCEST! RAWR. TWINCEST.
Well, you don't have to but it would be hot.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 - My cat loves pillows too. And paper. But I didn't know the pillow thing was a cat trait. Hmm...well. So, Jolan and Zo are together? Hot. Wait, wait. Who are the twins, then? I am very confused. Are they even twins in the story? Ummm...