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Chera Root, oh man that must be some fine aphrodisiac, and poor little Max just couldn't stop himself from sharing more than First Meal with Kasan. It's amazing how you make this so easy to visualize as Kazan's family reverts to teasing the hell out of their loved ones mating ceremony. Gotta love a determined, horny Max as he continues to puzzle and enchant his mate. Lol, and please continue!

freaking hilarious!

Great update! I wonder what Max will do when he wakes up and remembers practically begging Kasan to sleep with him. And when will they figure out that Max thought he was a slave? I can't wait to see Kasan's reaction to that. Or to the human race being weirded out by the gay marriage idea.

Youpsss ! Another great chapter !!
I know you have other stories but I can't wait for the next chapter...
Love your new name !

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! As funny as ever. Thank you for making it nice and long. Hope we won't have to wait another month to find out about what happens next. Will Max be introduced to the king?

Wonderful chapter. So that whatever root is an aphrodisiac huh? Poor Max here he is thinking now he has some control and then there it goes again. Like how you presented Kaasan assumptions and questions on Max's reactions to the news of being a consort. Maybe Kaasan will get closer to his one brother he thinks is such an ass now they have similar consorts. Can't wait to read that conversation. Hmm, wonder his other brother; the one who did the research for him, will find anymore information on humans. That would be interesting; to find out what happened to the other humans that had been there so long ago. Wonder how Max will react to that? Those bird-like creatures that had Max sounded like one nasty race. So did they have something to do with the missing colonist? If so then I feel sorry for the others, at least Max ended up somewhere safe really . . . what are the chances the others ended up safe too? Max being worried about what the other colonist were going to think about him being married to an male alien was hilarious; I suppose it could be considered a form of political work, he did marry into the ruling family after all. Loved the part about the alien whisper! That is one thing I really enjoy about this story; it has so many elements to it. It's not just a romantic slash with lots of smexy man loving, it has action, some angst; as far as what Max is going through and what happened to his people plus you have Kaasan's uncle's betrayal, there's mystery, and comedy. I really love your story. Seeing this chapter up made my day, thank you. Sorry to hear you were having issues; hope things are well with you now. The new name is very nice too. Well I'm off to go see those pictures. Take care, hope things stay good for you. Hope to see more on the story. Keep up the great work.

Thankyou for the update, it was well worth the wait, Max adapting to his new enviroment is sooo cute and most of all realistic. i was wondering if he wasvring a loin cloth since you didn't mention him puting it back on etc. lol, bareass kasan.
p.s i am now an avid fan, i've read all your work on ur aff account + sum on y-gallery, it's all really high quality work! you should be proud, reading them was a pleasure, looking forward to ur nxt update.
Fuzz

That chapter was hilarious!!! Well worth the wait! Just please, a request of you, please don't take so long next time to update. I truly thought you had abandoned this story. Glad to see you're back.
Asyen

OMG this story is amazing! It's hard to read at some points because of the language barrier and seeing the same scene twice, but at the same time you don't get to see the hillarity of it all. I love it and It's now in my book marks. I can't wait to read the next chapter, especial now that Max and Kasan can talk alittle. And Zo should tutor Max it would so make Kasan all jelous because Zo can understand Max better, ^-^ KYA!!! I think I'm going to read it all over again. <3

LMAO, ROFL, Oh my god! I loved it! That was great! The sex scene was H.O.T. HOT! But damn, the ending was too damn funy! This was worth waiting for, but I do hope that you update again real soon, okay?! I can't wait for the next chapter!



~~Aki

P.S. As I have mentioned before, my work schedual is hetic, if you could let me know when you update I would be very greatful!