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Loved this chapter! They have the most interesting foods ever! XD So there are other humans! It'll be very interesting to see what happens if they meet up with Max again, especially if one of them likes Max, and maybe he likes that person back? Anyhow, they probably won't be too happy to hear Max being taken while he was drugged the first time. Looks like Kasan's gotta work a lot harder from now on. Can't wait until the next update!

I loved this chapter (like usual). Nice change having both points of view in the same chapter, I preferred it to the others; enables a closer look at both of them.

Sex was brilliant too.

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LOL! I love this!! its so hot!.. man I never thought i'd see Max more eager (although it was under the cheery root influence) but it was great.. I was thinkin what 'traditional' meant until the end and i couldnt help but laughed like a maniac in front of my computer.. look forward to the next one!

O_O LMFAO~!!! TOO FUNNY~!!! omg~! i was beginning to worry because you hadn't updated in awhile, but i must say, it was worth the wait. *nods* i'll never lose faith in u again *hugs* the ending made me laugh so hard~!
Max will not be too happy at his sad attempts of not having sex. D: he's such a cute little slutt <33
thanks for that wonderful update and i'll be looking forward to more. love ya~!

Very interesting plot, and I cant wait to see how it all turns out. Poor Max, his reaction to it all was very amusing, especially with all the no's he was gving Kason. He sounds adorable, and Kason sounds absolutely sexy. Great chapter, update soon please!!!

it's funny that he forgot to wear his clothes after he helped Max come.

I absolutely adore your story and am constantly checking it for updates great work!

Is it just me, or does their courtship seem like an utter Comedy of Errors? Kasan makes me laugh, he's so smitten but he's equally lost as to what to do about it. Max is hilarious, and the implication that Jolan made about him being a scholar like Nolluz made my head hit the desk. Not to say he's simple, by any means; he's smart, no doubt about it, but linguistics is also his specialty....and he is in no way like Nolluz, hell, he'd probably hit Nolluz if he knew what the pompous windbag was saying and he went on a tangent.

Aosh is a trouble maker, and I'm curious and a bit leery as to his future actions and apparent fascination with Max.

I've been reading this since its creation, but I don't think I've ever commented on this. Sweet mercy, these bastards are tall! If precious "little" Max is 6'1" and he only comes up to Kasan's shoulder, roughly....! Good God, I feel positively diminuitive at my whopping 5'7".

Updates make the world a more blessed place.
Nacht

Chapter 11 "Welcome to the Family"

Lots of fun! Love the familia! Love the interactions!
Love the new name! Love the hot, nuptial sex!
Love it, love it, love it!

Thanks,
R

Another excellent chapter. Wonderful story, so funny and sexy. I'm counting the minutes until you post the next chapter. Thanks for sharing!