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Sooo happy that you updated again! This chapter was very interesting. What exactly is going to happen to Kasan during his Service? And his the pet that Max found really safe? Update again soon plz!!

Glad to see this was finally updated. I was starting to think it was abandoned. I find it annoying when authors leave people hanging so long without good explanation.

I enjoyed this chapter tremendously. When Max was looking at the sky and later walking under the trees, I started wondering if he had any tan-lines, and then if the cats had tan lines, and if Max DID have tan-lines would Kasan wonder about them? The garden seemed somewhat primordial, although since the meal included flowers presumeably evolution is fairly far along. A blue sky would indicate a high oxygen-rich atmosphere, but the intensity of the blue suggests a somewhat different chemical composition than earth's - will that make a different to Max?
While the sex is great fun I find myself more caught up in the traditional elements of your story, so forgive me if I blather on here a bit. So glad to see this story updated again!

this is a great story!! i look for a new chapter every day. can't wait to find out more about the dog and the freaky plant thingy. keep up the great writing, and post again soon.

Yay! New chapter. Just a few questions - will we ever get to know what's inside the hole in the ceiling - the one that the dog thing crawled into? Or is it just a pet area thing? Thanks and keep up the good work.

loved it great story
wish i could chain u to a computer so u could just keep writing

I'm so happy that you updated ! You "enlightened" my night !!
Another SO funny chapter...
The last creature is very curious... Can't wait for the next chapter !

Hello, again. Glad to see you back with another wonderful chapter. It's so nice to see Max finally able to communicate with Kasan and his people. It was especially nice to see Max get a little payback on Aosh, who is way too much of a smart ass for his own good. Kasan's father was extremely nice to Max as well. He certainly showed sympathy for Max's separation from his people by offering kinship to him. Also I'm very interersted in Kasan's punishment-service? There was no sex this time around, but I'm sure you be back with more next time. Just please don't let us wait so long. Oh, and please continue.

Awww, this was a funny chapter, poor Max. He gets a little more tramatized everyday! That pink thing did sound gross, Im glad the cute puppy saved him. Great chapter, update soon please!!!!

that was freaking awsome!!!!!!!!!!

i love the freaky alien puppy thingy

i love you and your awshumness!!!!!!!!!!

more! more! more!

omg *hugs you*

max is so awsome!!!! kicking someone who is a giant...lol

i have so many questions, like will they find anymore humans? or find out more about humans

and what is this service they were talking about???

please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!