AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for The Last Pure Human

by szaugg

person Rawben
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol!! pink thing, huh? i'm curious! what was that? what was the dog thing? is it really his pet? tha'ts hilarious.

great job!
person casbuz
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it i ve read this way to muny times please update soon
person dutsada
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL awesome chapter.. I was thinkin Father and The Pink Blob... I was like, which freakin cat is named Pink Blob? haha.. now i know... love that tree climbin 'puppy'...
person Anita
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, Max kicking Aosh! That was just to damn funny *lol* And that garden there certainly was a nice touch....except for the pink blob of course! Keep on writing!
person irinutza
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, the dog was really nice :)It's so ironic that a cat owns the dog ...
I wonder what the SErvice means.. please update soon, i'm so into your story
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always, well worth the wait. Thank you!
person Rorarin
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. It was great and as funny as always! I like how the story is developing and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zonta ... drool

Love it!
person Kip
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just keeps getting better and better! You got me hooked! Purr.
person XhoXho
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I ever reviewed? I'm sorry if I haven't, I'm really bad about signing in. For sure I've been reading since the first chapter was up though! This story is the only one that I am following religiously. I check this section *JUST* for your fic!

I love the plot, the sequence of events, and the characters. Some of the characters don't have as much depth as the others, but that's fine for now. Occasionally, their libido distracts me from what is actually going on. Like I had no idea they were at the banquet for so long, but there was so much to explain during that chapter. As for their clothes, I do kinda find myself wishing they wore something hot...like sexy robes, but that is just my own fashion style talking. Haha.

It's interesting to read about Max's experiences in a foreign world. I'm also a linguistic major! Kasan is being totally cool throughout this whole story. I'm glad that the issue with the uncle is being resolved, 'cause Kasan just rocks. Pretty cool how I can also see Kasan changing as the story progresses.
Oh gosh, but there are just so many things I can compliment you on. The writing, the cool characters, the plot, the development of the story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this and update~*!