rate_review Reviews

Wow, that is a hell of alot of changes. Its just one chapter but already the atmosphere is way different. I'm very happy that you decided to pick this story back up. It'll be interesting to see what other changes you plan on making.

*swoons*
i had lost hope!
i dont blame you for not wanting to finish after a break of a year.
i know i have no business compairing myself to a writer of your sheer amazingfulness, but the same thing happened to me. people change over a year and its hard to get back into the same character and mind frame and writing style.
so even if none one else can find any fault in your story, you feel you can do better right?
so my hats of to you (well if i was wearing one i would deffiently take it off) for taking this story up again. i am looking forward to reading more of it as much as i am to seeing pirates of the caribbean 3 (ok so this may not sound like much to you but i m sorta obsessive when it comes to jack sparrow... so its the highest compliment i am capable of giving... yes i know its sad)
so please dont abandon this one!!!!
thank you so much for writing more about dagan and hopefully brent.
... you did say there would be a lot of changes...
oh gosh i really hope you keep brent. i liked brent.
ok well im gona leave you alone now, but i just wanna say that you rock. thank you!!!!!!!

I loved it when it first came out and I hope it will continue to rock or get even better. Good for you for picking this up again. I hope you won't get too frustrated with re-working it.