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for Perfection in the Eyes of a Killer

by Zodiac3780

person livid fire
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
go,imajica,go!
you go girl!
or boy.
whatever,gender isn't realy important here anyway.
or at all.
*G*
person ariesgirl
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeease write more! i was so happy that you started this story up again but now you've just left there and i want more and its not fair cuz i cant even reread the version that you had up before and i REALLY REALLY REALLY liked it
you're being a cruel
*pouts*

person dwelf
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful news! I am always sad when an author abandons a story. I am glad that Perfection in th eyes of a killer called you back to it and to us. I am certainly looking forward to read you again. And I wish you courage and muse for it is not easy to start again after 1-2 years. Good luck.
person nini
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've read 14 old chapters and always wish to read more.
It's good that you decide to pick this story again.
It is somewhat different, no very different.
To tell the truth I like the old style more.
But it's only 2 chapters, so I'll wait and see.
person Shangyu
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well! That's certainly different from your first version of the story... Don't know if I like it better yet tho. Looking forward to reading more soon! Thanks!
person ariesgirl
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this just makes me smile
yes i know, guys shooting at proffesional killers shouldnt put me into such a good mood, but im just so happy that youve started it up again!
and and and eeeeee!
theyre just so cute!
... i mean scary. yes deffinetly scary and manly and killer like.
*giggles*
yay!
person xyphel_k
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!

you are back
_Breaks into tears_

Missed you so much!
especially when you left us at such a hanger
><

you are back and that is all that matters
_Looks forward to your works_
person Shangyu
schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reworked version? Whatever. I'll just re-read it from the beginning then. Simply GLAD that you've decided to pick up the story again. ^^

Good luck!
person jayree05
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes! it's back!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PitEoaK, huh? Cute.
I am so glad to see this story reposted! I just turned my C on and there it was - 1 chapter.

Reposting the story like that is a brave thing. I am eager to see what it will look like now. I've seen some people on AFF making a big improvement in writing ability in a 1-2 years span.

There seems to be difference in writing style, it is shorter and more concise, I beleive. A bit hard to compare from memory. I remember the feeling the old version gave me - eerie and sublime. Not sure how to express it. There was magic between main characters. The characters themselves felt real.

I get the feeling that not only the writing style had changed but the plot also. Waiting for more with anticipation.

Thank you so much for giving Perfection in the Eyes of a Killer a second shot:D