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May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have a feeling you're buttering us up for a fall...
So much sweetness just has to mean something awful is coming.
Of course, we still haven't seen a good side of Mirje...
So much sweetness just has to mean something awful is coming.
Of course, we still haven't seen a good side of Mirje...
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've owed you a review...
I've enjoyed all the chapters of torture and was ashamed to admit it. Now that plot is back in the works, I breaking down the barrier.
Well done.
I've enjoyed all the chapters of torture and was ashamed to admit it. Now that plot is back in the works, I breaking down the barrier.
Well done.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! i've really enjoyed it..keep up the good job
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 3
Hi, SierraLuna,
You do update fast! Thank you:)
I like this fic more and more, you did develop a good plot. All the events are interesting; torture and rape scenes are really well written and pretty scary. I could feel Jahhan's despair there. The guy was a well-known actor, right? That is why he was sold out against his will? He never would imagine entertaining people through being tortured, though.
You seem to have a tendency to not give descriptions on main characters, hehe. I got this feeling that Rylam will be one, but, ones again, no idea about his looks, age, mannerismes. If you absolutely unable to insert that into the story, then a short page of character descriptions in the beginning could be a good idea. I don't like those description pages in stories, but would rather have that than nothing!
Overall I really like it and would like to see more:D
Hi, SierraLuna,
You do update fast! Thank you:)
I like this fic more and more, you did develop a good plot. All the events are interesting; torture and rape scenes are really well written and pretty scary. I could feel Jahhan's despair there. The guy was a well-known actor, right? That is why he was sold out against his will? He never would imagine entertaining people through being tortured, though.
You seem to have a tendency to not give descriptions on main characters, hehe. I got this feeling that Rylam will be one, but, ones again, no idea about his looks, age, mannerismes. If you absolutely unable to insert that into the story, then a short page of character descriptions in the beginning could be a good idea. I don't like those description pages in stories, but would rather have that than nothing!
Overall I really like it and would like to see more:D
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah!!! a new chap....i love tha fact that he wants more to be with his punisher....than others....hopin for more
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It must be good if Jace actually gets off his lazy butt to review it. Therefore you should take this little message as a compliment even if I can't say why I like it particularly. I just think it's good. *cuddles it* Please write more?
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 1
Hi, SierraLuna,
Pretty good first chapter. You don't seem to have anything else posted so, just in case: WELCOME:)
This chapter did get my interest, it's complex and introduces many characters.
I would like to get some description on Jahhan because I can't visualize him. What does he look like? How old is he? According to the chapter he could be anywhere from 30 to 50.
This story doesn't have M/M, M/F or any other indicators. So, is it all about torture? I read predominately Slash but would read a good M/F story:)
Will be reading the next chapter to find out more about Jahhan's ordeal.
Thank you
Hi, SierraLuna,
Pretty good first chapter. You don't seem to have anything else posted so, just in case: WELCOME:)
This chapter did get my interest, it's complex and introduces many characters.
I would like to get some description on Jahhan because I can't visualize him. What does he look like? How old is he? According to the chapter he could be anywhere from 30 to 50.
This story doesn't have M/M, M/F or any other indicators. So, is it all about torture? I read predominately Slash but would read a good M/F story:)
Will be reading the next chapter to find out more about Jahhan's ordeal.
Thank you
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one is fascinating - and so well done.
You've created a world that resonates with turmoil and emotions.
Really looking forward to subsequent chapters!
You've created a world that resonates with turmoil and emotions.
Really looking forward to subsequent chapters!