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for Origami Heart

by Silvae

person Anon
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far - can't wait for the next installment. I love stories that make me curious =)
person Saminada
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good start!! I like it!^^
I wonder who that boy is... is he the killer?
Why were those people killed anyway??
*sights* I can't wait to know what happens next!!!
Plz update soon!
person DEE
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far(just read the one chapter so far) there just two things that I would like to point out.
In Ireland 999 not 911 is the emergency services no. and and Police over in Ireland are called the Garda. Sorry If I sound very up my own ass it just I am for Ireland and little things like that do stand out when I am reading your story.
If your not sure about something Irish them http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Ireland-related_topics should help you.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You. Rock. My socks. Love this story, i'm all caught up in it now, can't wait for more!

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