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for apple seed

by manasadong

person Anon
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this story!
pls write more :-D
ur french is really funny! lol
person dut
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! The brief Smexxy scene was great and find Ken's surprise visit at the wad was so cute! Is there a soft spot I see somewhere beneath that Viscous looking Mongolian? I really hope the next chapter can be up soon~~~ no pressure though.. Lots of love~~ (in a fanish kinda way.. oh you know what I mean)
person dut
schedule December 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is certainly new to me.. never read a story with mongolians in them before.. Love the where this is goind though.. I hope you can update soon! I'm pretty excited for the next chapter~
person sissy
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Roland is really cute. Cool story.
Please update sooner!!
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really interesting. What's with all the post-apocalyptic fics popping up recently? I mean, I'd never seen this genre before and within the past few months, I've seen more and more stories set in a futuristic/post-war setting. I'm definitely not complaining in this case. XD You're a fabulous story-teller. It's off to an interesting start and I can't wait to read more. Ken's vulgar mouth cracks me up...

If you are still looking for a beta, you're welcome to hit me up! I love reading and writing... n n You can catch me on AIM/Y!M at theprincepirate/peachlikeprince respectively or you're welcome to email me at peachlikeprince@gmail.com. Keep up the awesome work and I'll be checking back frequently for updates! :D
person Fenris
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, you're 20X more creative than me. I love Khenbish. He and Yaseo could pass as brothers, man.
person Ashley
schedule April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is delicious! Do update!
person Sandre
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Roland is so cute.
I really really like your story.
Please update soon!!
person nana
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I like it. Please write more :3
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please