schedule
May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One thing--in the last chapter (epilogue?), during the wedding, it was very confusing as to who was narrating. It started and ended with two different narrators, but there was no definite switching point.
schedule
April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story but one thing that confused me was the stuff about a vasectomy. Wouldn't he have healed it with his healing ability? Also that argument was never resolved.
schedule
April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so wait did they loose the baby? did troy die? i hope nnot but i like the story so far.