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for The House that I Grew up In

by Tirch

person cu-kid
schedule October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I have a that third time will not be charming with Annabelle trying to befriend the Wiz. It felt like he was lying through his teeth through the whole last part and it makes me a little uncomfortable - and, I'll admit, scared - to think about future interactions between him and Annabelle. Keeping my fingers crossed it won't be unpleasant!

Sooooooo glad to see you updated!! I've been going through a serious withdraw of good/interesting/well-written romance stories, so I was ecstatic to see this! As always, this recent installment was wonderful.

~cu-kid
person nesl247
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's been quite some time, and since I don't see an email for you, I'm hoping maybe you'll reply here.. or at least see my email address.. I hope you're doing alright, and even if you don't write anymore, would just like to hear from you that you're doing fine.

See ya!
person star
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi

i have to say ive been to alot of site with free stories and ive been reading them for like 4 years and this is the first time ive ever read ALL of any ones stories and i have to say that i loved them All your like the best non-pro ever keep it up !!!!!!!!! e-mail me at starburst19sky@yahoo.com if you want to talk more
schedule February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm a big fan of your work. Was wondering when you might start writing again. I'm anxious to see the end of this story!
person Joee
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's been a looooong time since an update, I'm loving this story. I really, really, really hope that you will update soon!!!!!
person Lauren
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say that I really hope you continue this story. I know that you have a life outside of updating so I'm grateful that you even take the time to write such amazing stories for people to read. This summer I went on tour with my band for a couple of weeks and made sure that every night I checked for updates on this story. Luckily I had my laptop with me so that I could also read your other stories to occupy my time.

Now about the story- I like the fact that Annabelle seems "perfect" but she has problems just like everyone else, and knowing that makes her more human and realistic rather than flawless. I like where the plot is going so far and hope that more will be revealed about the characters when you decide to update next. Also, I'm from Long Island so it's pretty cool to read about something based on where I live. I don't really know what else to say besides the fact that I really enjoy reading what you write and I look forward to reading more of it.

-Lauren
person Kirsche
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(sorry i'm not logged in)
Have I told you lately how much I love you? Cuz your fabulous!!!
This story is soooooooo cute and it makes me all fuzzy inside. <3
person twinklingdee
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 9: I'm dying to know the Christy back-story. But with every chapter I read, I love Annabelle's character even more! YAY for another great chapter.

On a side note: I apologize for not keeping up with the stories. It's been a busy traveling summer and I am just now settling back into life. What that said, I haven't given up on your stories, nor will I. I just don't have as much time as I used to. I will definitely continue reading when I can!
person twinklingdee
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 10: I love kisses in the rain... there is just something so sweet about them. :) Love the chapter!
person twinklingdee
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 11: There are only two words for this chapter: Sweet and amazing! I am in awe and completely blown away that I'm rendered speechless. :)