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Chapter 20, I forgot that Annabelle and Quinn could have a long distance relationship. It could work. Aww, Quinn's analogy of Annabelle and himself to a rainbow and an "undesirable rain" was so sweet. I'll admit that the bond between Annabelle and her mother is strong just by their greeting at the airport. Thanks for the update.

The summer of your new story sounds good.

Tirch! you do not know how happy I was to see these updates after all these months! After your stopped updating year before last, I kind of forgot your username.. then I remembered and kept checking every now and then without any updates and was upset. Then I stopped coming on AFF all together.. Yesterday, yesterday I did and was so happy to stumble upon this story again! I've just spent a few hours since yesterday re-reading the whole story :) I still am a big fan of Broken Dynamite and cannot wait till you continue writing on the spinoff with Kirsten.

This last update has been flawless. The paragraphs have flowed one into another fluidly in chapter 20 and I'm so proud of your writing and glad that I've been able to read it :)

All the best! And can't wait for your next updates.. Kind of wish you posted on Fictionpress too though! But a reader cannot be too demanding. I guess its become..I've become shy of coming on AFF :s

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That was great. Very sad. I hope this story does not have a sad ending. Keeping going for sure. :)

Oh and I meant to mention when I reviewed last that if you do decide to continue with some of your works in progress, I hope it's Noticed. I was really looking forward to reading more of that one, as I think you mentioned - I don't know if it was on here or in an email - that it was going to be quite dark, in the same vein as Why Bother. So that's got my attention, as Why Bother is probably my favourite of your stories.

Paula

I love this story...so glad you are back again...I'm soo happy for Christy...

I hope to see more of this story soon!!

Ur welcome, I must admit I have only recently found your stories and slowly getting through them. Keep going it is a nice surprise to see a new chapter. :)

While I'm a wee bit sad that there's only a few more chapters left of this story, I'm so excited about a new Tirch story! :D Say, do we get a sneak preview... ? That would rock ;]

Paula

Well, if you insist, I'll go ahead and take that "Ultimate Reviewer" trophy and place it on my mantle. =)

This is becoming one of my favorite stories that you've ever written. There's a lot of different reasons for this, but none is more significant than this reason: In my view, there's not one, not two, but THREE main characters in this story who are interesting and multidimensional. First is of course Annabelle, the gentle and forgiving soul who impacts the life of practically every person she meets. Then there is obviously Quinn, the tortured bad boy with a pure heart that has been brought to the surface by Annabelle. And then there's Christy. She had a perfect life as a child. Perfect parents, perfect household, perfect lifestyle, perfect best friend, perfect everything. Then she had that perfection crushed by a boy who couldn't control himself. Her life was dramatically altered by The Wiz, and it took the combined efforts of Annabelle, Quinn, and Josh in order to save her from being that way forever.

Thanks for saying I'm wonderful, but YOU'RE more wonderful for posting two new chapters in such a short time span.

I say... Finish 'Noticed' please!! I love the 'Broken Dynamite' series, and I'd love to see Eddie, Sin, Lianna, Joseph, and the whole gang return for a crazy awesome family-ish reunion.

And you're an awesome writer, and I love you for that! Happy to see another update from you, but don't worry about having a few months in between updates. You're only human and we respect that you have other obligations and what not. Just write when you're happy and when you want to and we'll be here :]

Paula

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

I was so stoked to see this update, you have no idea! I'm not even sure I can leave a decent review, since I'm still grinning from reading the chapter - not, of course, because it was funny in any way (although, that last line was kinda cute), but because I'm so happy to see this being resolved.

So...review...hm. Well, I know I've said this before, but the Wiz is a douche - and you portrayed that wonderfully. The things he said made my skin crawl and made me hope Christy would beat his face in - and then she did, which was SUPER sweet! Because him making her think it was her fault that just makes me so...grr! I'm glad he got his ass kicked! Jerk.

I'm interested to read the interaction between Christy and Quinn - I think that will be a nice scene between the two "archenemies." And I'm still super curious about what's going to happen when Julia gets into town.

Great chapter! Do it again! Not too soon, of course, take your time...we'll still be here :)

~cu-kid