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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that's not good. I hope that Quinn sticks up for Annabelle against Christy. Can't wait to read more.
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're welcome Tirch! You haven't lost your touch.
As for chapter 4, I think it's sweet how Annabelle is showing Quinn what he probably missed out on when he was a child. I couldn't stop laughing when Annabelle thought what Christy said was "not one of Ghandi's quotes", haha. I like Annabelle's perspective on life, people, and just how simple things can mean so much. I hope Annabelle's mother call soon. Best friends my butt Christy is just using Annabelle. Thanks for updating.
As for chapter 4, I think it's sweet how Annabelle is showing Quinn what he probably missed out on when he was a child. I couldn't stop laughing when Annabelle thought what Christy said was "not one of Ghandi's quotes", haha. I like Annabelle's perspective on life, people, and just how simple things can mean so much. I hope Annabelle's mother call soon. Best friends my butt Christy is just using Annabelle. Thanks for updating.
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Well, I am definitely a fan of all your stories, and while I have read almost all of them, I am not much of a reviewer - though that has definitely been changing recently, so expect to receive some from me (and I've read most of your stories only recently - after they have been completed)! :) Anyway, this story is off to a great start, and I love Annabelle's character (and her mother)! I admire people who do so much to help others. Though this is ultimately a romance, I think its awesome that you are showcasing the good that humans are capable of. Like Annabelle, I hate labels, so she is definitely a character I identify with. I'm interested to see what Quinn is going to tell her...
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In chapter 2, instead of accepting Annabelle for who she is Christy tries to change her even though her way about it is quite subtle. Quinn is not so bad after all and he seems to be the only boy that is real in that neighborhood. Thanks for updating.
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3, even the mother seems cold. I like the Ghandi quotes you've added into the chapters. I think it's cute how Quinn takes off his leather jacket when he sees Annabelle after their talk about labels. I can't wait to read what Quinn has to say about himself. Thanks for updating.
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"After all, you’ve got the attitude, the clothes AND you work on cars – you’re a bad ass. You’re like Fonzie."
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Loving this! I'm really feeling for Annabelle - but I really like her as a character.
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Loving this! I'm really feeling for Annabelle - but I really like her as a character.
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I must say that labelling being the most part of the story is something that people should talk about more often. You are doing a good job with it so keep up the great work. I hope she gets angry at how they live and makes everyone relise how they truly are if they don't change their ways. Hope to read more soon.
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok im just gettin around to reading this new one...But wow so far i love it..i cant wait to see how it all turns out im off to read the second chapter now...oh yeah I remember you:D
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting better and better...i cant wait to see how it all turns out for annabelle and quinn...great job
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, like your new story but then again I like all your stories. I read the first chapters a couple a days ago but couldn’t review but I saw today that you have allowed anonymous reviews so here I am letting you know that you have e great story in the works.