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May 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I LOVE this story! Keep up the great work.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the sweetest chapter! It definitely made me squee a few times :]
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Tirch! Hope you're doing good. I was absolutely charmed by chapter 6 because of what Quinn and Annabelle have are what I call ideal in a friendship because there is no pretenses. I liked the scene when Quinn asked Annabelle if she wanted to kiss him and her reply was, "right now?" Haha, that was very cute. Tirch, I find the way you describe the feelings, nervousness, and emotions of the characters realistic. It makes a simple thing like asking a question or standing in the kitchen palpable. Thanks for updating.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. What is going on with Christy, I mean, Christine. What is in her lil mind? Can't wait to read more soon.
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I can't wait for more!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this today, but I managed to get my way through all of it in record time. Count it as a compliment. As for a real compliment--it's really goo. the character and the plot are deep and interesting. I like reading because I always know there's going to be something unexpected. One thing you might want to work on, though, is Cristy's character. Even though she's a shallow bitch, there has to be more of her than that. Why does she do the things she does? Is she insecure or is it something more?
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“That may have actually been the best first kiss in the history of mankind.”
That line is totally awesome.... it gave me warm fuzzies.... I think I actually awwwwed!!!!
Great Job as always, can't wait for the next chapter!
That line is totally awesome.... it gave me warm fuzzies.... I think I actually awwwwed!!!!
Great Job as always, can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww i loved it. it was so sweet. u should have him draw her. not like titanic style but u know what i mean lol. neways i hope u update soon.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember you, I remember you! I havent been on here in awhile, but I love your stories. I am so glad to see you writing again. I will check often to keep updated on your "stories". As always great work!!!
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5, this chapter just radiated sweetness. I like the way I had to piece Quinn's guilt together instead of being told directly what he did or what happened to Jason. It makes Quinn's confession real. I don't ever see Quinn and Christy ever getting along or be civil to one another. Thanks for updating.