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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first things first... how on earth have I managed not reading one single story of yours?!? And, I've been here for quite a while!!!
This is the first story I'm reading and although I'm only half way through it, I just had to take the time and tell you that I'm in love with your writing style!
Since I haven't finished all your chapters I can't say a lot of things. One thing I can say though is that you can count me as one of your readers and reviewers.
Off to finish this story and start with the others. :)
This is the first story I'm reading and although I'm only half way through it, I just had to take the time and tell you that I'm in love with your writing style!
Since I haven't finished all your chapters I can't say a lot of things. One thing I can say though is that you can count me as one of your readers and reviewers.
Off to finish this story and start with the others. :)
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who do i have to beg to get more chapters around here?! lol, it's all great hun, update soon! plz
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Time for a little catch-up reviewing. This review covers Chapters 1-9 of The House that I Grew up In.
As has come to be the norm with your writing, all of your characters are well established and show a definitve personailty as well as a distinct movement in an emotional direction. Your writing still proves to hold so much raw feeling or emotion as compared to the other authors out there. Your ability to weave a web of characters that I instantly hold a grudge against and learn to love is still prevelant, and as much as I already love this story, I'm going to hate the drama/angst etc that is to come soon.
While earlier on I had wanted to see more with Cathy, I think the pacing of the story thus far has been exceptional. It always amazes me how you can write about mostly everyday life with your charactesr and have them develop so realistictly from just those experiences. Plot-wise, a whole lot doesn't happen, but your characters grow and change throughout the story.
From a personal standpoint, I would like to see a little more of The Girls/Guys as it seems Cathy's character seems to keep getting lost inside and outside of that same crowd.
As always, keep writing so that I can keep reviewing.
As has come to be the norm with your writing, all of your characters are well established and show a definitve personailty as well as a distinct movement in an emotional direction. Your writing still proves to hold so much raw feeling or emotion as compared to the other authors out there. Your ability to weave a web of characters that I instantly hold a grudge against and learn to love is still prevelant, and as much as I already love this story, I'm going to hate the drama/angst etc that is to come soon.
While earlier on I had wanted to see more with Cathy, I think the pacing of the story thus far has been exceptional. It always amazes me how you can write about mostly everyday life with your charactesr and have them develop so realistictly from just those experiences. Plot-wise, a whole lot doesn't happen, but your characters grow and change throughout the story.
From a personal standpoint, I would like to see a little more of The Girls/Guys as it seems Cathy's character seems to keep getting lost inside and outside of that same crowd.
As always, keep writing so that I can keep reviewing.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Replace the name "Cathy" with Christy. -_- I'm awful with names.
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
after reading chapter3:-
i find it strange that Quinn all of a sudden felt like sharing some personal stuff with annabell..There wasn't enough leading up to it in terms of conversation between the two- that's how I feel. Perhaps i could be judging too quickly as i haven't started on chapter 4 yet.
after chapter 6:-
The only part I found of less quality than your usual writing is what I mentioned in chapter 3. Off to read the rest of it now!!! :D
i find it strange that Quinn all of a sudden felt like sharing some personal stuff with annabell..There wasn't enough leading up to it in terms of conversation between the two- that's how I feel. Perhaps i could be judging too quickly as i haven't started on chapter 4 yet.
after chapter 6:-
The only part I found of less quality than your usual writing is what I mentioned in chapter 3. Off to read the rest of it now!!! :D
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just for your info, I enjoyed reading Broken Dynamite. About to start reading this one.. wish there could be a spinoff on Zip and Sarah, Lianna and Joseph or even ummmmmmm Sarah's brother and Sin!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay a new chapter!! Damn, are Quinn and Annabelle taking it slow or WHAT?! I'm starting to get nervous, though. There's been all this happy lovey-dovey stuff so far, and not too much crazy drama. That gives me the feeling that something major is coming...
So far, though, everything is up to your usual quality. Keep it up!
So far, though, everything is up to your usual quality. Keep it up!
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I wonder what's gone on between Katy and Christy... Intriguing stuff. Great chapter! :D
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June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. I am wondering what happen to Christy when she was younger. I think it has to do something with that Dan guy. Anyways it was an awesome chapter and I cannot wait to read more in the near future.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it no big deal. im glad that u keep writing. neways im excited to see where this story is going. hope to read more soon