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I really enjoy this. Brightens my day when I read it. So I can't wait for an update!:] Thank you for writing this:]

That is an amazing chapter. Alright I have a feeling that 3 things are going to happen. One: She is going to stay. Two: He is going to leave with her. Or Three: They are going to take off together somewhere new. I love this story and I cannot wait til the next chapter.

Yes, I know I rock. And I write long reviews only for you. That is how much I rock.

First of all, frequent updates are fantastic. Second, Christy is showing a little more depth now even in the limited time that we see her within the story, which I like. Third, Quinn being afraid of rain was an unusual element of the plot, but the imagery of Quinn and Annabelle kissing in the rain is nice.

It's kind of a weird feeling that I'm getting now with this story. At first I wanted Quinn and Annabelle to just get it on already, but now I'm starting to feel conflicted. With the limited time they have together, that could create some emotional time bombs for both of them. I don't know what I want to happen next...

It's great to see you back writing again. I only just realised that this story had been posted because i haven't been to the site in a while... now i have something to come back for regularly.

I absolutley love this story. Your characters are very well developed and draw me into the story and their lives. Annabelle is just the sweetest thing ever and so good for Quinn... who can resist a good girl taming the bad boy with issues? The way that Quinn is so gentle and patient with Annabelle makes my heart flutter. I want a Quinn!!!

Christy is such an interesting and complex character. I love how she's developed from a seemingly shallow bitch to a girl who has obviously been dealing with some intense problems that have caused her to become the way she is.

I can't wait to see how the story develops. I'm hoping that they decide to take the next step in their relationship and that somehow Annabelle won't have to leave.

Also, I'm looking forward to an update of the 'Kristen' story. The Broken Dynamite series was amazing and I love every new peice of work written around those characters.

Just in case you haven't gotten it yet... I love your work!

Chapter 8, damn Quinn and Annabelle were interrupted in their hot make out scene, haha. I do wonder what Christy is hiding from Annabelle that only Katy seem to know about and Christy seems different... She seems to genuinely want to spend time with Annabelle. Thanks for updating.

Thank you. Character assessing has become a habit that is done either consciously/unconsciously in my reviews. I'm just glad you don't mind it at all and you're so welcome.

Chapter 9, I couldn't help but laugh when Annabelle had to ignore a few things about Josh to see the niceness in the boy. I don't like this Dan character and he probably had some history with Christy. Haha, did I just rhyme. Christy's secret must have been devastating enough for her to change. Thanks for updating.

I know I keep saying it but, I love it. I can't wait for more!!!

I know your writing pretty well by now, but that's not a bad thing. There's a fine line between quality writing that's a bit formulaic and standard writing that's repetitive, and you've always managed to be well on the side of formulaic quality. If a formula is good, then there's nothing wrong with using it.

And besides, even with a formula of boy meets girl, boy and girl become lovey-dovey, super crazy drama ensues, and finally find a reasonable conclusion, there's plenty of ways to mix up HOW each element plays out. That's what you've managed to do with each of your stories: Mix up how everything plays out so that, while the general formula is the same, each story has it's own individual feel. And every character in each of your stories has a unique history, which makes it even better. That's why I still think you're one of the best writers here.

And I think this story, in particular, mixes things up even more with Annabelle and Quinn wanting to hold off on the more intimate stuff because Annabelle isn't sticking around.

I didn't know that there was a new chapter up in my last review. So I thought I would say again, that I love it and I can't wait for more!!!!

I've read two chapters now and I am really enjoying it so far. I really like that you included all those facts in the first chapter and mentioned the Tsunami disaster. It shows how aware you are of the world and even though I think that facts don't seem to play (or aren't supposed to..I don't know!!) a large part in fiction, I appreciate it when I come across such findings!

Thank you for acknowledging my 'comment' review : ) Thinking more deeply into it, a sequal would spoilt it all but hopefully I'll get a glimpse of the 'lives' of the Broken Dynamite members in your Kirsten story.

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