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for My Brothers Love

by devilslastkiss

person Mo56
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter. very informative. i'll keep my eye out for chapter 8!!
person Kasandra
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter. Alex is such a tease. Anyway, keep up the great writing.
person goose
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, now we understand a little of the family background...but what WILL poor Zuri do about her hot, horny big brother? Hehe... ;)
person VicRia
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAH! I love this story! Please gimme more Fuzziness! Its awesome! Please update as soon as you can next friday! You kept me hanging for a long time T_T
Lotsa Lurve, R
person Mo56
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you still got it! i wish i had your drive to continue writing. my stories are way past due. anyway, keep it up!
person goose
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's actually kinda fun to see what Zuri ends up getting herself into.. :P
person ShaSha
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I love this story! Please update soon.
person Slinki
schedule May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I actually started reading it a while ago, but haven't been able to get back the computer. So today I sat down and read six chapters in a row, and I was in heaven. I have to say, the only thing (gramatically) that was annoying was the tons and tons of forgotten apostrophes. All in all, it was great, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter you post.
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is crazy and cute. I love this story and I hope you can update really soon. I am looking forward to reading more of it
person Anon
schedule April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story. Update please, please, please!!!