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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
una historia muy buena y muy bien escrita, lastima que no este terminada, a ver que pasa entre z y alex, eso esta muy caliente, ana maria
schedule
July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hate when a muse takes a vaction! What a bummer and it was getting really interesting.. Hope, you get too update soon...
schedule
February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe I do recall reading the first couple of chapters before, but I never got around to finishing them. I meant to review then, but I never got around to it, and for that, I apologize.
In regards to your technical composition, you gave me the warning about messed up tenses, typos, and the like. I'm sure you can find a beta. Check out the forums.
Other than that, it's a good story. Your characters seem to be well thought out, and the flow of your story is coming along quite nicely.
Keep it up!
In regards to your technical composition, you gave me the warning about messed up tenses, typos, and the like. I'm sure you can find a beta. Check out the forums.
Other than that, it's a good story. Your characters seem to be well thought out, and the flow of your story is coming along quite nicely.
Keep it up!
schedule
December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAA
Oh girl, don't do this to me T_T
I'm completely addicted to your story and you're not writting anymore!
That's so unfair!
Please write, your story is so good (probably the best inc. I've ever ready)
Take care ^^
Oh girl, don't do this to me T_T
I'm completely addicted to your story and you're not writting anymore!
That's so unfair!
Please write, your story is so good (probably the best inc. I've ever ready)
Take care ^^
schedule
July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so i want to know his answer to her question...
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now the plot thickens and it's a little more dramatic. I can't wait for the next chapter I am in love with this story. You are a great writer please keep up the good work. I can't wait to read some really intense sexual scenes for this story ^_^
schedule
May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon!! I love it.
schedule
May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just got back up to your new chap very good hope for more soon :)
schedule
May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is quite good. Please continue to update, I look forward to Friday.
schedule
May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so diffrent from everything else I've read. Please, please, PLEASE update soon!