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person Ashlynn
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far. keep it up.
cant wait to see what is going to happen next.
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wondering...anybody got any questions about characters, plots, etc? And no, I'm not going to give away spoilers!
person MDK95
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter looking forward to next update :)
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that makes me a little sad to know that you don't like Joe. But now that I see it, I can see how both Joe (a little too whiny) and Stephanie (a little too spoiled) could get on anyone's nerves. Thanks for the feedback!
person MDK95
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this one as much as i did the last 2 so give me more soon ok it's just great :)
person Ashlynn
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!
a new series. pretty good start. keep it rolling.
actually i was looking more for jacy's story. but lani and ryan is good since they were attracted to each other or at least ryan to lani from the very beginning. want to know where this is leading to.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im really excited about this one...so far its great..keep it up