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schedule April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i give up!.....am i the only one here thats hates cliffhangers? lol great chapter hun, please update soon *R*
person Ashlynn
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why does jacey seem kinda weird all of a sudden? what is she up to?
wow,ryan is such a gentleman. hope those two get together soon.
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really, really, really needing more of this....please,please, pretty please update soon xx*R*
person Ashlynn
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww..... poor lani, she must b torn at this moment.
person Ashlynn
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep up with the story. r u working on another series? i hope to read more of ur work. it is great!!!!!!!!!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I must admit that I had been rooting for a Ryan/Jacy coupling, but I did always feel the chemistry he had with Lani, so I still like them as a couple.

I'm dying for the Jacy story though. for some reason I have always loved her character the most out of the four girls.
person Ashlynn
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow tristin is such a jerk.
person cb0822
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your other stories, but I don't like how Ryan cant play football anymore.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but I thought we might move away from the whole football thing. Don't worry. Football will play a bigger role toward the end of this story into the last one. Thanks for the review.
person Ashlynn
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hope ryan will be better soon and play football again.
i personally doesnt have much question. but have to say hunter and tristin doesnt really have a personality. they are kinda flat. is it cause they do not really play a big part in the story? cause the way im reading is that they are just there. or maybe it is just me.
well anyway, all in all, i really love your story, hope you will update soon. and when will lani and ryan get together. seems like everytime they have a few moments alone, they would be interupted or an argument. hope they get to have some quality time together.

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