rate_review Reviews

Hey uh. Just wanted to let you know that you made an anatomical mistake. The hippocampus is actually not the pleasure center of the brain - the hypothalamus is usually thought of as the pleasure center, although I can see where you'd mix the two names up. I am taking an anatomy class right now is all, and the instant I read that I was like, "what??" hah. Anyways, good story.

GREAT!

awww that was great!

Very, very nice.

The plot line is fascinating - the creator wanting to pleasure his creation. But I'm most impressed with how fluidly you write descriptions of emotions in physical terms. Not physical physical - rather the analogies to physical.

Can't even describe my own reaction - just know that what you've written strikes one of my own hidden nerve endings.

Very beautifully done.

I really like it. -smiles- Though, and please forgive me for saying this, but I do wish it were longer, like maybe more then one chapter? Sorry, I shouldn't have said that, it's fine the way it is. I didn't mean anything by it. Sorry, again. Oh!, and on a side note, I am a fan of mythology as well. Infact my first story is going to be based on Greek Mythology ^_^ -is a mythology fanboy-

Truely lovely. I think your use of heat and cold was pretty much perfect. Loved it and I hope to see more from you.
-Diz