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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was hot.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Wow.
I've never gotten so hot and bothered by a story before, and I read plenty on this site! Your descriptions were spectacular, and the flow of the story fit so well it with how you wrote it, it was mind-boggling. Your story took my breath away.
Keep it up! I'm not sure if I want to continue, but I probably wouldn't mind if you did. This was an excellent piece!
I've never gotten so hot and bothered by a story before, and I read plenty on this site! Your descriptions were spectacular, and the flow of the story fit so well it with how you wrote it, it was mind-boggling. Your story took my breath away.
Keep it up! I'm not sure if I want to continue, but I probably wouldn't mind if you did. This was an excellent piece!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was really good, but i have to wonder, how many lovers does this chick have?
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so far, i liked it until you had to end it there! WHY!!! but anyways, hope you update soon!