schedule
April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This made me happy! XD You should write more about Nate and Sammy and their situation. (How did they end up having sex in the first place?)
Dee
Dee
schedule
March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I was having an internal debate with myself here because of several reasons.
First of all, I am an incest writer myself and I enjoy comparing different attitudes towards this topic. Well, you went the different way than I - and it's ok, I liked your way. But I am really curious how they ... decided to be together. I mean, who initiated it, how it happened that they are together and if they had any ... regrets, I guess. It's difficult to make a decision like this. But it's ok, sometimes something lighter can be good as well.
Then ... I like your style, the story was flowing without any disturbances and I actually could picture the scenein my head - which means a lot for me, I am a visual person and measure the story by te degree of 'visuality' so you get a high score here from me.
What else? Hm, for a moment my head is empty, I guess I am tired after the day. If I have any oter comments to add, I will come back and leave nother review. Thank you for this chapter and - well, I don't know if you're planning to write another chappie here, you left it in the point where the story could actually finish. Though I hope I will have the posibility to read more of it.
teeta
First of all, I am an incest writer myself and I enjoy comparing different attitudes towards this topic. Well, you went the different way than I - and it's ok, I liked your way. But I am really curious how they ... decided to be together. I mean, who initiated it, how it happened that they are together and if they had any ... regrets, I guess. It's difficult to make a decision like this. But it's ok, sometimes something lighter can be good as well.
Then ... I like your style, the story was flowing without any disturbances and I actually could picture the scenein my head - which means a lot for me, I am a visual person and measure the story by te degree of 'visuality' so you get a high score here from me.
What else? Hm, for a moment my head is empty, I guess I am tired after the day. If I have any oter comments to add, I will come back and leave nother review. Thank you for this chapter and - well, I don't know if you're planning to write another chappie here, you left it in the point where the story could actually finish. Though I hope I will have the posibility to read more of it.
teeta
schedule
March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whew...bored brothers lol, guess they fixed *that* problem. lol. nicely done! I hope there's more ^^