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for Raven Holand

by ANGEL2006ASHLEY

person VERY interested
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HA what a twist. while i do appreciate whats going on so far, i'd SO LOVE to see her seduce some poor guy against his will!!!!
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:( not to sound like a total bitch or anything. but 190lbs for 5'7'' is overweight bordering obese by .1 according to the national bmi (body mass index)

um...other than that great story!!
update soon!! :D


person Leentjef
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
post soooooooooooooooooooooon
person Idwraith
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, quite the character you've got there.
person DB1
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@2 cool update soon.

*DB*
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucks this story is getting my pussy all wet.
person MW007
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job...i am enjoying it.
person phillis
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really like your transition from your previous work to this kind of stuff. If you need any help with reviews or someone to proof your work, feel free to give me an email.

Keep up the good work.

Cheers
person WeepingAngelOfDeath
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fuck people and their shallowness. 190 isn't jack sit. That's what's worng with the world, too much emphasis on sticks and not enough on curves...REAL curves. I love this story, please continue it and forget all of the flamers.
person Anon
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
5'7" and 190 lbs? HOLY SHIT is she fat.