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person Laur
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Girls
Adira- strong Hebrew
Medea- cunning Greek
Kiara- bright Latin

Boys
Silas- of the forest Latin
Arashi- storm Jap.
person newmoon
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoa. can you say betrayal? i feel bad that the little girl got caught up in all of this.. and its insane how you can have it so *_____ and then have me snickering in the next sentence. it keeps the story refreshing, that way you dont end up with a doom and gloom story. kudos

*insert adj.
person Spirit
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay the Hellcats are back!! :D
Love this chapter, can't wait to read about them hunting!
(I know I say I love every chapter, but I seriously, honestly do. you're a great writer. Oh and I'm leaving for vacation for six weeks on monday, and there's a good chance I'll be without Internet most of the time. I'm still a Loyal and I'll read anytime I can!! :) )

~Spiritxx
person newmoon
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. question. how is claudius alarik's brother if he's married to alarik's mom? incest maybe or some Vamp title? that one had me scratching my head. kudos
person Cindyip
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice, all three get kitties:)
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe I love Azrael! He's so colorful. Hades is back too! I missed the little brat. hehe. Ja!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh my God!!!!i can't belived!!!!!i thought i analyzed every possibil posibily, every solution about what will happen. but you did it again!!!!well i wan't completly wrong i thought about some new hellcats!!!!but that was all!!

Hades to the rescu!!I WAS JUST IMPOSIBL TO PREDICT!!!

I CAN SAY ABD I KNOW I AM RIGHT!!!YOU ARE THE WORLDS GREATS GENIUS!!!!!!!!

Can't wait to see what will happen next!!!!!
person shiden
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was great! cheers for hades!!! you go hades!!!

its all getting rather exciting! and a tad fearful! you have me by the balls - so to speak although i don't have any...

i did feel sorry for hot chocolate but like you make the bed you lie in :)

so what happened to sarah and her folks? did they get a good slappin? are they going to apologise to xavier&bros?

i really hope the wedding is a peaceful event... and i hope claudius will be able to make it to the wedding unhurt!

thanks again for the update... can't wait for the next one!
person shiden
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i forgot to add, nice touch with the hell kittens!!

i want one too!!!

also i want to ask, if they (xavier, sex, azrael) go through blood starvation again, would eating a hell kat's soul help alleviate the problem?
person Rosei
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45 "Hades and Hellcats"

Hades!!! That sexy, pouty, randy, teenaged, vampire/ancient... to the rescue!
Alarik sure turned tail and got out of there post haste... Hades
must have quite the reputation and of course Alarik would be a sitting
duck to him! On another note: I loathe the name "Orel Wessel."
Where did you get it again? (So I can avoid it.)

Love the bros. showing their new found maturity and strengths,
(they're going to need it.) Great chapter really moves along!!
Never get tired of the interesting Hellcats. The boys need all
the help they can get. Perilous times ahead!

You're the best!!
Thanks,
R