AFF Fiction Portal
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He got wings??? Awsome!!! There is going to be another book right? You said something about Cloves?? Please don't end it here. *starts to cry* Please?
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... You are amazing. A distraction because I should be working on my own story instead of becoming so engrossed in yours but hey we all need a little break :).Your a great author and I love your stories. This one is my favorite so far even though I love them all.
-mb
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pardon the foul language but.. Oh. My. Fucking. God.

"Oh my god…he was Royalty."

That line just blowed my brains away. Royal Claudius with Wings is just sooo sexy. I've got goose flesh. And Sex with a wing envy.^^ It's just so... I dont know. It makes my ribbon glow.
person shiden
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh

That was pretty cool! Xavier pissed eh? so he thinks he is hashamillon.. interesting ....
what does the seer think? poor mo! he didn't get much lime light.. would sex feel that his cat has gone?

can't wait for the next one..

there will be a book 4 right?
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was unlucky. Just when I clicked review.. I got the message about the daily downtime of AFF.

Anyways..

"No, my middle name wasn’t trouble magnet." <-- I thought X said that 'Careful' was his middle name? Shade told him to be careful, and he said That's my middle name. Right? (Did I miss something?)

Ahh! Mo is dead? Already? Poor Sex.. Gets his first Hellcat, and it dies in the next chapter.

I liked this chapter, because X is way cool here. It's a little distressing how he called himself Hashmillan, but eh, he was acting too cool for a Blood Emperor for me to stay distressed.

I guess this is the first step in letting Hashmillan be known? And the first real step of the Blood Emperor...
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and you want names? You've got names.

Three Girls, Two Boys, eh.

I really like Japanese names, so be forewarned...

Boys:
Aki (Japanese): autumn, bright
Hikaru (Japanese): light, shining
Keiichi (Japanese): respectful first son
Kiyoshi (Japanese): pure, saintly
Takeshi (Japanese): fierce, warrior
Yuki (Japanese): happiness, snow <-- I will love you forever for using Yuki. (Gravitation, mm)

Girls:
Emiko (Japanese): smiling child
Kaori (Japanese): fragrance
Mika (Japanese): beautiful fragrance
Miki (Japanese): beautiful tree, three trees
Rika (Japanese): valued fragrance

And the following are all moon-related.. because they're Lycan, get it? *is so tacky*

Boys:
Aku (Babylonian): moon
Chander (Hindi): moon
Koray (Turkish): ember moon
Sashi/Shashi (Hindi): moon

Girls:
Ayla (Turkish): moonlight
Aylin (Turkish): moon halo
Aysel (Turkish): like the moon
Jaci (Native American Tupi): moon
Mizuki (Japanese): beautiful moon
Rishima (Hindi): moon
Selena (Latin form of Greek Selene): moon
Yue (Chinese): moon
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooo. ;_; once again, my review was too long and got cut short. I forgot to copy&paste this time. Ahh.. I'm so disappointed.. I guess I'll try again..

Girls: (All Japanese)
Emiko: smiling child
Kaori: fragrance
Maiko: dancing child
Mika: beautiful fragrance
Rika: valued fragrance
Yuka: fragrant, friendly blossom

All of the following are moon-related.

Male:
Aku (Babylonian): moon
Chander (Hindi): moon
Iah (Egyptian): moon
Koray (Turkish): ember moon
Sashi/Shashi (Hindi): moon

Female:
Ayla (Turkish): moonlight
Aylin (Turkish): moon halo
Aysel (Turkish): like the moon
Aysu (Turkish): moon water
Jaci (Native American Tupi): moon
Mizuki (Japanese): beautiful moon
Selene (Greek): moon
Yue (Chinese): moon
person k
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I didn't intent to kick Your ass

[babynamesworld.com messes pretty often with the origin and meaning of names. In the cases of Orel and Wessel it seems far fetched to derive both words from German origin. Orel seems to come from Latin 'aurelius' ; Wessel may be a slurred form of Wernher coming from the old German tribe of the Warnen but he 'Orel Wessel' sounds nice.]
person Ciar
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My computer gives me trouble for what, two months? And when I come back you've almost finished the story! As always, absolutely loved it. I even screamed out loud in some chapters, as well as woke the whole house up when I laughed.
And now I want the next chapter, and Claudius. I mean, Sex wants Claudius, so he better be alive and kicking.
person laur
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thought i would point out 13,000 hits!!! Whoooooooooo! Waiting for next chappie!