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Hi
I have followed your story from cake and really enjoyed it. I would never have guessed that X would have ended up in japan . Can't what to see where this one goes . thank you for great writing

Kiix,
Another beautiful chapter. I adore Ping, in my opinion she & Haley will get along wonderfully; as long as her interest in Azrael fades. Hades is proving to be a bit temperamental isnt he? Ah well, after being poisoned then abandoned by the one who claims to hold you closest to their heart can make you more than leery. Expecially when said person treats you like the child you were when he was last with you. I will say you have grasped the basic Japanese language very well, I am not fluent myself but I know a bit picked up from various anime. Do keep going--I expect at least 50 chapters on this one as well for a complete installment. *grins* Kudos to a wonderful author.
Asyen

Another sweet chapter. Thank you so much. Pouting doesn't do Hades any good but even though - he is a cuty and Ping, I'm looking forward to her in America. Sounds like a lot of fun. I still hope she and Claudia will become friends. Not that I doubt Claudia's abilities as Lady Empress - she is Claudius' daughter - but it would be nice for her to have an ally inside the pod's house of frequent madness.

I hope you don't stop being overly inspired anytime soon. Your writing is so good!

Started already?! Wow, your amazing! Great chapter, update soon please!!!

please update!! it's really interesting! i like it...

as always another great chap the only thing is, is that i was getting a little bit confused with how the time line was going. one minute he talking about the past or having a flash back and then it jumps to the present without a worningbut for maybe for an extra space in between the paragraph and nothing to say wether or not it was just a change of seen or he's have a flashback or what not. a suggestion for at least the flashbacks if anything to maybe write XXFlash BackXX and then XXPresentXX or something it doesn't matter. its just that this one was really bad and i just thought i should say something cause in your head you know where the stories heading, we're just reading your thoughts so you've got to make it more specific or we get lost in the process. but it was a great chapter all in all. and is Liam ever going to stop hitting on X. an the seens between hades and billiam are hot as hell even though theres not really a disciption of whats goig on but for that one part where someone is getting bitten at a very sensitive area. and azrael is outstanding as usual. i mean only he can be hot at the same time he's killing someone after tlaking about geting the shit fucked out of him by his puppy. please write more soon!!! XD

Psh, right off the bat and we are already missing days of Azreal and Marcus. Those two cannot catch a break.

Woow ! So fast ! Great as usual... I hope for the next chapter soon... What became the seer ?

Kiix,
Caramel huh? Nice. I was suprised that you started up the 3 so quickly. I am impressed so far... Hades & Billiam's relationship--glad to see that Hades is making him fight for it!!! I look forward to seeing how this installment into the trilogy progresses. Keep writing!!!
Asyen

i cannot believe that the next story is already being posted! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! You do know that you are a Goddess, right? Cause you are. And we love you and your All Mightyness!