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i love what X says to hades in the elevator, but i wasn't expecting hades would collaps and start crieing i mean X of corse that boy is always crying. pore haley getting so horny he couldn't even make it to the bathroom, he just too cute. any way i guess thier heading back now can't wait to see what happens. XD

Coming back from my trip, I so looked forward to reading this fic. And I must say you have me rolling with a plethora of emotions already. I am so damn enthralled. Been hooked since the beginning of Cake. Gosh, I like Liam even more now. Him and Hades are killing me. I also like seeing this side of Hades because it makes him seem much more vulnerable. For people that have lived for so long, you would thing that would have grown up. Even it is just a small amount.

Seeing the brothers take care of business is exciting. Do what you gotta do. Or Claudius's motto works well here too. Now time to get back home and recoup with sex or something like that with good old Armor(or kinky between the sheets Marcus) and Claudius. Ya know, one of those pairs. Oh and adorable Haley. Gonna get his little groove on and have a litter of potential Alphas. Awwwww. And then Claudia; how far along is she anyway?

The seer. The new guy. Lanseng. Seems interesting. So the Blood Collective, what kind of chaps are they?

*pitches a tent until next update* o_O

I love the storyline thus far but please don't make Haley stay in Japan, at least not so soon. Ping and Haley pups - I'm all excited (especially since all japanese wolfs died out) but I wonder how long does a lycan need to carry? 63 days like a wolf and will Haley have to do all the hunting while the pups are suckling?
I still think Hades and Liam could use a mindfuck - not to change their behaviour, just to make them realize (not only) their partners needs and feels. For some reason they don't seem to do 'on some therapists couch' (I borrow your wording and hope you don't mind.)

The storyline leaves so much room for suggestions and everytime you post a new chapter, it turns into something different - good and unique Kiix - and makes it hard for me to wait for more. (I would like to see Britta's reaction to the news - the old lady must fume.) Go on!

Haley isn't really leaving us is he?T_T

Ooh, Ping & Haley action to be coming up soon! yay! Haha, I can just see the dumbfounded look on Sex's face when Ping kissed him lol, totally had me laughing. and BLUE hair?? ROFL!!!!! way to blend in... haha. But at the same time.. I don't want Haley to stay in Japan.. couldn't they live like, half the year in Japan and half the year in the states? Just when Haley's getting interesting, please don't take him away. He makes me laugh too :)
Loving the writing, keep it up!

xxSpirit

You always surprise me ! Great chapter ! Love your humor...

Hello kiix. Thanks for clarification about caramel. I guess I'm used to form "carmel" and "carmelki" - as a popular form of candies. And by the way, blue hairs was a great idea - I had a great laugh over that. XXX

Interesting, poor X he really needs someone to hold him now:)

Hello again! I've seen that you started 3rd part. Congratulations!! It is awesome. However I'm not totally sure if I like new title.On the other hand it can be becouse English is not my native language,so I'm suspicious about creating new words (God knows that I have enough problems with learning those already existing). Oh, and IMO your writing style's improved since "Cake". Best regards.

Yea! We lova the new story!!! Damn, Hades, why you gotta be such an ass?