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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Happy ending! We have Haley! And we got two new members ib the House...so happy! Great chapter, updare soon please!!!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nah nobody chewed on me. *pouts* Wouldn't have minded too much getting munched on by Azrael, Sex or X. =D Thought... maybe not, when angry they can be very very painfull.
God I'm so happy Haley will stay! I couldn't believe he will be leaving... until this chapter, then I was starting to fear it was going to happen. He's a little annoying, but he's part of the family.
God I'm so happy Haley will stay! I couldn't believe he will be leaving... until this chapter, then I was starting to fear it was going to happen. He's a little annoying, but he's part of the family.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! he's home! hehe can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne! PA.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sayanora is right.
The pod/family just loves to mutiply. OOOOh the sword is interesting and i am having a perminision that Ping and CLaudia's offspring will have an effect on the nation. Britta will try to kill Ping and suceed and Haley and X will raise the pups. Also Claudia's girls will carry the blue line and will become Co-Empresses and the sword will come out and turn them into blood hungry people. MUHHAAAAA....keep on writing!
The pod/family just loves to mutiply. OOOOh the sword is interesting and i am having a perminision that Ping and CLaudia's offspring will have an effect on the nation. Britta will try to kill Ping and suceed and Haley and X will raise the pups. Also Claudia's girls will carry the blue line and will become Co-Empresses and the sword will come out and turn them into blood hungry people. MUHHAAAAA....keep on writing!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh im so glad u kept haley yay u, that was a great chapter theres gonna b puppys!! :)
***wishiing u inspiration for the next chapter to come quickly***
***wishiing u inspiration for the next chapter to come quickly***
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, ping's father is making things complicated. Though we know what'll happen to that since we've read the first chapter.
Also, X with blue hair... kawaii (to keep in the mood of things)
Also, X with blue hair... kawaii (to keep in the mood of things)
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 95
i think you are the first person to have ever done phone sex and you know what it was absolutely WOW. i never tohought you could top all your other sex seen but i was wrong im mean if you can top that you are without a dought the greatest writer on earth no the universe.
chap. 96
Haley and Ping were so cute but i don't want haley and X to seperate there great togetherand plus hes sapose to be his protector. and on that line of thought that fight was great. i nver would have thought about using the mind-cuck-ability to gane a fighting styles. as always you always seem to amaze us ever time and i hope it nver stops. write more soon. XD
i think you are the first person to have ever done phone sex and you know what it was absolutely WOW. i never tohought you could top all your other sex seen but i was wrong im mean if you can top that you are without a dought the greatest writer on earth no the universe.
chap. 96
Haley and Ping were so cute but i don't want haley and X to seperate there great togetherand plus hes sapose to be his protector. and on that line of thought that fight was great. i nver would have thought about using the mind-cuck-ability to gane a fighting styles. as always you always seem to amaze us ever time and i hope it nver stops. write more soon. XD
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering - have the eastern-lycans the Zsigmond-oath too? Ping would be bounded through it, if she becomes Haley's mate. You see the prospect of leaving Haley in Japan really bothers me, but I guess you made some sort of April fool hoax.
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kiix,
Another fantastic chapter! I adore the way you keep building upon the fragmented character of X (especially the love and respect you are forming between the brothers). Alas, poor Hades--he can dish it out but doesn't take it well does he? I noticed there is much similarity between Ping and Haley's new found relationship and our boys however, I feel that some mimicing hold a story together more firmly, so brava. I also wanted to inform you of something I found whilst reading in the Vampire section of originals: an author by the name of Pyromaniacs Anonymous--she/he has written a story by the name of Black & White that holds many, many similarities to Cake (granny smith apple essence/blood within a sire, black haired "grand sire" and sire- both with a fetish for leather and black, new fledgeling with platinum hair...etc.); the similarities were a little disconcerting to me, and I thought they should be brought to your attention lest we have a "copycat author".
A contented reader,
Asyen
Another fantastic chapter! I adore the way you keep building upon the fragmented character of X (especially the love and respect you are forming between the brothers). Alas, poor Hades--he can dish it out but doesn't take it well does he? I noticed there is much similarity between Ping and Haley's new found relationship and our boys however, I feel that some mimicing hold a story together more firmly, so brava. I also wanted to inform you of something I found whilst reading in the Vampire section of originals: an author by the name of Pyromaniacs Anonymous--she/he has written a story by the name of Black & White that holds many, many similarities to Cake (granny smith apple essence/blood within a sire, black haired "grand sire" and sire- both with a fetish for leather and black, new fledgeling with platinum hair...etc.); the similarities were a little disconcerting to me, and I thought they should be brought to your attention lest we have a "copycat author".
A contented reader,
Asyen
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no the fuck he didnt! He better go somewhere with that, 'fore I kick his lycan ass! How dare he demand X leave him be. I'll bawl my eyes out! Anywaz, I cant wait to have minature them running around. Its going to be sooo cute1 And I mini Haley! Damn, that just stole my heart! Great chapter, update soon please!!!