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YAY

BUNNIES!!!! Happy Birthday again!

That was hot but Claudius and Sex are way hotter. Um yea. Other comment from chapter 6. BROCCOLI? Dude who would fang brocolli? I mean it is nice with chinese food but ewwww. That is all. Over and Out.

awwwie! so cute. totally wasnt expecting pings father to get down and dirty though, that was a shocker. and then hades again. oh jeez. didnt his parents ever teach him any manners gosh. get a grip already. he might just be doing this to cause trouble. troublemaker.
i think the household is going to be an interesting sight with three females arounds not to mention the ones claudia will be having.(im assuming she will have two girls but that would be an interesting turn of events if she didnt have girls. is not like X and his sister havent changed the tradition already).it seems so weird with haley being a daddy now and still being able to be under X. i can tell that hes growing up though. hes acting differently-not in a bad way or anything, i guess in a more mature way? having more than a five-word conversation with his alpha.hehe but i still love him anyway.
and why dont they use their telekinesis anymore? i totally forgot about that.
whats with this lady Endellion? she seems dangerous. i mean if liam is worried...seems like another side plot to me! and here we go on the ride of our lives!just when we think u cant come up with anything more twisting and complicated. but im happy about all of it. gives me something to look forward to. i was going crazy not having to internet this past week. I couldn't read your story!! but here i am now happy as a butterfly! you never dissapoint.:)thankies kiix!
meadow

I'm so glad that haley get to stay with X and now theres two more people added on to the family not to mention one of them is going to be having a litter of pupps and Cladia is, i'm hoping, going to have twins. and poor Billiam can't get over that little bit of info i sware that was so funny i mean wow i thought he knew. poor Pings dad he thought he was going to be ganing a son but lost a daughter and grandkids. as always another great fight seen. And as for that phone sex thing from the other chap., no it was the second but still it was great as fuck so take the compliment and like it. and as we say every time write more soon. XD

Just so you know i've been reading and i wanted to wait untill i caught up before i reviewed. i just started ch. 6, but i'm so sleepy i'll have to finish tonight. I wanted to ask what's Hayley's flavor?

Finally SAX are home.... And GO SAX AND HALEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOT! they're awesome and kicked ass and its awesome.

xxSpirit

PS. sorry for the short review, last day of classes tomorrow before the break so everything's got to be turned in. :S

Heard on the news this mornings about the Hawaiian Pineapple.

The Cayenne pineapple is the Hawaiian variety. The scales on a ripe Cayenne tend to be a lighter yellow, the leaves have a smoother edge, and the pineapple itself is much larger and more elongated than the Red Spanish. The flesh is deep yellow.

Hmmm. Does this sound like Billiam?

I beleive a Happy Birthday is in order...i know early but just in case I dont get to say it later! Happy Birthday!

Alright, X is finally going home!(^_^)

Sex is a charmer - covering Ping's nudeness with his wings. That was just so sweet. Thank you for giving Hades a hint - that was sweet too but probably Hades won't ever give up befriending Sex now (Not that I would mind. I like Hades and I think he could be a useful and gentle friend, if he ever ceases from his spoiled brat and boss attitude, though it might be too early or entirely too late for something like this between him and Sex).

Actually this was the first chapter, in wich I think of Liam being nice. Good for Hades.

I'm curious about all the new names - twin girls (?) for the brothers and 5 puppies for Haley. I especially like the idea of an Imperial pack. Do lycans and vampires grow like human children until they reach adulthood? Von Drachenfeld will need a kindergarten and a school - I would like seing Haruka as teacher but I'm trailing off - sorry.

Has Liam a problem with Claudia's pregnancy or is he just astonished? (He definetly knew X wasn't sterile. He sat at the blood fountain when Dr. Maxwell anounced it.) He wouldn't have want to be reincarnated into one of Claud's babies, wouldn't he?

Counting now all the new females in the house (including the puppies and probably-will-be-twins), I think the von Drachenfeld-males will have hard times ahead and I hope Ping will kick Britta around a bit. I'm still curious why she banned Haley. I got the impression it was only because he revealed the killing-problem to the Vampire-emperor but now I get the impression it was more a Hashmallim, than a rules-thing.
Apropos Hashmallim. Can X use Endellion - I would find it odd if Azrael could but X not.

Soo many questions - I'm sorry but the story is just so intriguing. I love your writing and wait anxiously for the next chapter. Thank you!

Chapter 7 Sayonara

Thank you!

I freaked after Chapter Six. (Probably too much chocolate!)
Now my X world is back on its axis and I can relax.
Great chapter. Didn't realise I had invested so much emotion
(love)into Haley. And, it is so fun when Sex makes Liam bleed!
(I don't know why.)

Thanks again!
R