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person k
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my, that was so - in lack of a better word - sweet again. The brothers change Uke and Seme roles (ocassionally?). I kinda like it, but now I'm even more curious about Sex taking Claudius on a 24 hour 'trip'. Music, candles and a bed of roses? I especially like how the brothers interact and I'm most grateful for letting Hades get besser. I'm curious about the girls. When does Ping arrive and will Haru-Chan and Claudia come along?

Thank you for the new chapter!
person Cindyip
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Az isn't suppose to fall asleep that soon^_^;;
person Rosei
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9

Sweet chapter. Love the ambience of
their new suite and I love Hades' struggle
to become a feeling person again.

Thanks,
R
person Astra
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo, sweet chappie. Including bunnies and sheep. Can't wait to see what Claudia wanted...

Also, you have the right words but in the wrong word-classes in a couple of places. One of those idiotic mistakes spellcheck won't notice ;p

Sheep!
person Spirit
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"I was going to say something important." ....doesn't that just always happen to us just as we're falling asleep? Great chapter, can't believe Hades is actually shaping up, though I LOVED that little scene with Liam LOL!!
Thanks for the Monahan reminder, I knew it sounded vaguely familiar.. Guess I should read closer but it's just so good I need to know what happens next! :)

xxSpirit
person Jenna T.
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 - Awwww! The Marcus and Azzy penguin clan. How cute. God. I missed reading about X and the gang. And I FINALLY, finally got a chance to read it. So, forgive me for only reviewing chapter 9 for now. Anyway, Billiam and Hades are way too fucking cute. And Liam as lamb! OH GOD. Adorable. The Billiades Petting Zoo. Mmm. Naughty ideas. Must..stop...thinking about...right...NOW! And Ping and Haley! Pregnant! With pups! And Claudia too! Oh my God! But seriously. Haley's kids running around will be crazy. I fear for the penguin pod's sanity. Or..umm...what little they have left. X and Claudia MUST have twins. A girl and a boy. So the boy can be all gay and marry Lanseng. AHA! I have hooked him up from the womb. I claim myself the official matchmaker for the penguin pod featuring Claudia.

So, X's kids will definently be completely vampire, right? It's confusing to me since Claudia was BORN vampire and X was all turned and yeah. Yeah. But then he had the dormant vampire gene from lovely, lovely Armanita. And...yeah. Umm...something like that, right? I bet Armor's going to feel left out when the kid's come. Because Claudia and X will want to spend time with the kids and they'll have to be together. Unless you decide to pull a Mists Of Avalon and make the girl go away with Claudia to a far away land for... 'traning' and the boy will stay with the X and the rest of the penguin pod and the Pingaley pups. I'd love you for that. Even though I don't hate Claudia. She gets kudo points for being the direct spawn of Claudius and she's not like Armanita so eh. She's fine with me. And will Liam the lamb be a recurring theme? If so, I'll love you forever. More than I already do. And I have to say, I love you a lot. It's true, it's true. So much love for you and the penguin pod. So much love. Love and ass worshipping.
person a.taste.of.insanity
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sneaked on to the computer in the middle of homework, wondering if maybe - just maybe - you were being awesome again, and updated. And hoorah! There I am.. so lucky and blessed.

Azrael and Marcus are sweet together. But.. Marcus reminds me of an ex.. who was all "be mine, or I'll die" and such. .. so yes, I find myself a bit.. um, disturbed by Marcus? Armor's fine and dandy though. Hopefully, this feeling will disappear, as I see more of nice Marcus.

Azrael kicks ass though.

I didn't think I would be saying this.. but when are we going to see more bloody action? (I mean bloody as in.. well, bloody, gory, intensive battle. Not in British slang.) I love seeing the Brothers in action. Errm. You know what action I mean. They are just too cool in battle. But the talking katana.. Hmm..

Oh! Are we going to see more of Carnage and Armor in battle? Oui Oui? And maybe Claudia too. I wonder how she would fare in battle. .. If she goes in battle.

Ooh. I'm hoping there will be a huge battle to come.. where everyone - EVERYONE - fights. That would be super awesome. But I guess that would be in the end. Hm. I can't wait, yet, I wish the end would never come.

I adore you and your superior writing.

PS: I wonder what colours the Brothers would be? (In reference to X checking his email, lol)
person SODA
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, so sweet when they'er together! I love those guys! Great chapter, update soon please!!!
person Laur
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chappie Something 8 or 9

That was sweet and very kinky.

So Marcus does not know about the sword...i wonder what the sword signifies?
when is Claudia due and why was Liam so suprised...will he switch bodies with the babes and leave Billy? It would be funny if HAdes loves Billy and not Liam. Waiting for the next chapter!!!!
person Spirit
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the quirky end to the chapters!
And I read vampire bunnies on Easter.. how appropriate :P
SAX blue is... interesting. though I prefer white, definitely. Is he going to have to bleach or what? hmmm...
Q. I think I missed the Monahan thing, because I'm confused...?
Looking forward to having a new chappie when I get back from Paris! Loving the writing!

xxSpirit